A shrine to fragments of light

A shrine to fragments of light

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Long lay the slumberous winter...

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© 2023 An owl on the moon


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How very beautiful these lines, yes, you can sense when spring is trying to break through and the air and light becomes her awakening.
Your flowing alliteration is so nicely done too...

Posted 11 Months Ago


When spring is over, sets a misty fog in the field, and well feelings start pondering what is this life for in my mind. Then winter air comes in and brrr becomes the sound. I enjoyed this write, so light and breezy. Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping here and for your kindness and joy shared!
A wonderful poem for Spring my friend. We may get snow next week. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Ah, did the snow come your way again?! I so hope spring will be waking in your world soon. Thank you.. read more
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In our country there's this folklore about the diwatas, being of the forest, they're mysterious and mystical creatures we can't see.. But they roam the forest and take care of it by thier magics.. Like those magical beings, I see them in this.. Magical as always my friend...

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

So wondrous learning of these diwatas... these wondrous mysteries of life... of their magic... thank.. read more
Spring is in the air and in the hearts of every poet scribbling on a page, evidently. I enjoyed reading your seasonal offering Craig. Just lovely expressions and sentiments personified in this verse. It was wonderful to visit your shrine. Bless, F.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Always grateful when you stop by! Thank you so much. Hope spring is covering your world is joy.
Yes, spring is all those things. Of course, these days it is becoming more difficult to tell one season from another.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your presence... and your kindness. Ah, may spring awaken everything in beauty.. read more

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