I am sky...

Passion of heaven and earth, for the fairest of them all...

I am sky

And you are earth...

Let my winds

Caress your face...

Let my warmth

Roll gently over

Your fragrant skin...

My rains

Fill your rivers

And nourish

All your life...

My voice is as thunder

And gentle as the

Song of birds...

And I would

Cover you,

Guard you,

Caress you,

Forever...

 

Reviews

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Another strong example of sensual imagery. A nice free verse. Although I dare ask... What's with you and elans? ;p My choice of verses, would be the rain and rivers. That is striking in metaphoric value... I hesitate to say just what peaks my liking of it. Anyhoo... In true Canadian form I give this one an "EH"!

[chris' girlfriend]

WOW :D thats the most beautiful and sweetest poem ive read in a while :)
i love it!!!

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

This is a wonderful piece! It flows wonderfully and leaves the reader with a sense of bliss, romance, and longing. There is a promise of so much more in your words and I can't help but say that I love it.

Simple grammatical error to be fixed though;

"I am sky

And your are earth."

Should be "you" instead of "your."

Great job with this!

[Wildfleour]

C. F. - I love this and, to be honest, it reminds me of how I write and what I write about.

Whoever your muse is, is a lucky person! :)

[Sparrow]

Another beautiful spring piece from you. You make the most enchanting metaphores in your poems. There's a residue of temporary bliss and love left in my brain after reading this.

[Sarah]

I love the metaphor of the earth & sky in this poem, really unique & works well with your description! ;)