Hold on...

Dedication to a dear friend who is going through a hard time...

Moments of silver winter shift around us now

And in this chill we stand dead still.

Running won't get us far enough I fear,

If I could change your world, I would.

Always there for you, whatever the season,

Hold on to my promise of spring...

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

A friend must feel like life is so impossible. And you give wonderful advice, "Running from your problems will never solve them!" I see how you are there and would bear the burden if you could. I love the comparison of emotions to seasons. How our emotions do change as quickly as the seasons. Wonderful write!

[MorganLyn]

oh wow. So short yet so deep and meaningful.
No matter what... life will get better.. and spring will come.
great work!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This is a comforting poem.... It makes me want to go outside and sit by a fire all wrapped in my Nightmare Before Christmas blanket... :) Great Job!

[shadadakiya]

that was nice i love spring and summer too and hey it's finally here ,great write

[RougeAngel]

i can definitely relate to this right now. there have been so many times where i wished i could change things but the best anyone can do in that situation is to help keep their chin up. well done :)