Orange in October

Orange in October

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Life lets go in rhythm

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© 2020 An owl on the moon


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I love the wording so much, deeply written and full of imagery... beautiful write

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really love this write, I had to squint to see it, but I got it. Awesome write, you are quite a wonderful poet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I love your page layout & use of colors there, but it's a bit small for me to read comfortably. This reads like a dreamscape & it is said that every character in a dream is some aspect of oneself, which seems especially the case here. Like leaves shed every autumn, we shed selves that are no longer who we feel we are anymore, & then over time we may recycle some self that we've thrown away but we've been missing. I love the words "ruby. topaz. auburn." becuz I'm always harping on writers to use unique color words & lose the reliance on primary colors. I love the hopeful ending in prose & verse (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

4 Years Ago

Oh dear poet... thank you for your kindness.. I apologize for the sizing... and appreciate your lift.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

It's been in the 100's here for weeks with balmy nights, but it just turned cooler & both dogs decid.. read more

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Added on October 5, 2020
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