I love your page layout & use of colors there, but it's a bit small for me to read comfortably. This reads like a dreamscape & it is said that every character in a dream is some aspect of oneself, which seems especially the case here. Like leaves shed every autumn, we shed selves that are no longer who we feel we are anymore, & then over time we may recycle some self that we've thrown away but we've been missing. I love the words "ruby. topaz. auburn." becuz I'm always harping on writers to use unique color words & lose the reliance on primary colors. I love the hopeful ending in prose & verse (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Oh dear poet... thank you for your kindness.. I apologize for the sizing... and appreciate your lift.. read moreOh dear poet... thank you for your kindness.. I apologize for the sizing... and appreciate your lifting thoughts... Sending so much peace for this new week of autumn. (((HUGS)))
4 Years Ago
It's been in the 100's here for weeks with balmy nights, but it just turned cooler & both dogs decid.. read moreIt's been in the 100's here for weeks with balmy nights, but it just turned cooler & both dogs decided its time to sleep in bed with me & the electric blanket *wink! wink!*
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..