In the dust of my dreams

In the dust of my dreams

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Journeys on a crimson sky

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Oleander lullaby

Journeys on a crimson sky

In azure dreams I see her face

She’s anything but commonplace

Every night she dances there

Waltzing on my paper stairs

Nutmeg whispers in the leaves

Earth stands still as she breathes

The dust of my quiet dreams

Zinnia-scented paper screams

Eland stroll around my bed

Lulling me into her head

 

 


© 2019 An owl on the moon


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Firstly, I love your title, very dreamy ;) and the rhythm and your word choices are swaying, in my opinion. 'anything but commonplace' - ayee, that is how it is!
I read this piece several times, and each time felt this certain kind of comfort so thank you for that. Lovely write, Craig.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my .. read more



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Your last 4 lines really stood out to me, I really love this write, found it very creative. I love the flow and rhythm of this write as well. This is a very good write. Very creative

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ooh..
The up-down of your rhymes
The waltz between scent and image...
I would call this lulling word-symphony anything but common...
Extraordinary skill with a pen-brush...

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

So grateful for your words, for your reading of the lines and what's between the lines. Thank you my.. read more
apennylate

5 Years Ago

Absolutely, friend...
It is mesmerizing writing...
Something to be learned from...
Wonderfully written!
This is greatly an art of mesmerizing love felt by a lulling victim.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

I so deeply appreciate your kindness and insight. :)
Your words always leave an indelible impression on my heart. Who else could write of "paper stairs" and "nutmeg whispers"? I just love the mesmeric way you write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Dear Kelly, it's always a joy to have you by. You always lift me soul! :)
Firstly, I love your title, very dreamy ;) and the rhythm and your word choices are swaying, in my opinion. 'anything but commonplace' - ayee, that is how it is!
I read this piece several times, and each time felt this certain kind of comfort so thank you for that. Lovely write, Craig.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my .. read more
Each of your descriptive words is like a color. I see them in the visions on my mind as I read. So unique and pretty. She is like a ghost, a phantom that comes alive when you close your eyes, Truly a world not here. It's that place you always speak of and I feel the peace of it here. Lovely, Craig. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

I so appreciate how you are able to view the words in their colors, in the darker music of this drea.. read more
just beautiful ..fine natural rhyme and rhythm ...love the colors and imagery ..i want to dream of her forever ;) and Eland strolling 'round the bed!! too cool ..great choice :) i love dreaming .. i love remembering them when i do .. even if they are disturbing ... but this one is just delightful
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E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed the dream too, my friend! Thank you. Wishing you such a beautiful dreamish new week.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

same to you owl!
dear Owl... dreams are so mysterious and can be frightful... causing us to wonder why would we
dream things we have never experienced. Your Art is wistful and I love the water lillies. truly, Pat


Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

So grateful for your words, And yes.. my life seems to have been formed by so many of my dreams. I g.. read more
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

So many lines are lovely in your poem. It is a Keeper.
truly, Pat
A very pleasant, soothing and well rhymed piece. Had to go to Mr. Webster for Eland, though.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, John. I have a friend in South Africa so the Eland seemed a natural fit. :)

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