Firstly, I love your title, very dreamy ;) and the rhythm and your word choices are swaying, in my opinion. 'anything but commonplace' - ayee, that is how it is!
I read this piece several times, and each time felt this certain kind of comfort so thank you for that. Lovely write, Craig.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my .. read moreThank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my fingers to type it out.. I am glad it connected to you. :)
Your last 4 lines really stood out to me, I really love this write, found it very creative. I love the flow and rhythm of this write as well. This is a very good write. Very creative
Ooh..
The up-down of your rhymes
The waltz between scent and image...
I would call this lulling word-symphony anything but common...
Extraordinary skill with a pen-brush...
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
So grateful for your words, for your reading of the lines and what's between the lines. Thank you my.. read moreSo grateful for your words, for your reading of the lines and what's between the lines. Thank you my friend! :)
5 Years Ago
Absolutely, friend...
It is mesmerizing writing...
Something to be learned from...
Your words always leave an indelible impression on my heart. Who else could write of "paper stairs" and "nutmeg whispers"? I just love the mesmeric way you write!
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Dear Kelly, it's always a joy to have you by. You always lift me soul! :)
Firstly, I love your title, very dreamy ;) and the rhythm and your word choices are swaying, in my opinion. 'anything but commonplace' - ayee, that is how it is!
I read this piece several times, and each time felt this certain kind of comfort so thank you for that. Lovely write, Craig.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Thank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my .. read moreThank you so much Yumna! This is one of those poems that seemed to exist beyond me... yet needed my fingers to type it out.. I am glad it connected to you. :)
Each of your descriptive words is like a color. I see them in the visions on my mind as I read. So unique and pretty. She is like a ghost, a phantom that comes alive when you close your eyes, Truly a world not here. It's that place you always speak of and I feel the peace of it here. Lovely, Craig. :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I so appreciate how you are able to view the words in their colors, in the darker music of this drea.. read moreI so appreciate how you are able to view the words in their colors, in the darker music of this dream. Yes.. there are worlds so filled with vibrant life.. Find your way.. and don't look back, dear one. :)
just beautiful ..fine natural rhyme and rhythm ...love the colors and imagery ..i want to dream of her forever ;) and Eland strolling 'round the bed!! too cool ..great choice :) i love dreaming .. i love remembering them when i do .. even if they are disturbing ... but this one is just delightful
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5 Years Ago
Glad you enjoyed the dream too, my friend! Thank you. Wishing you such a beautiful dreamish new week.. read moreGlad you enjoyed the dream too, my friend! Thank you. Wishing you such a beautiful dreamish new week now. :)
dear Owl... dreams are so mysterious and can be frightful... causing us to wonder why would we
dream things we have never experienced. Your Art is wistful and I love the water lillies. truly, Pat
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
So grateful for your words, And yes.. my life seems to have been formed by so many of my dreams. I g.. read moreSo grateful for your words, And yes.. my life seems to have been formed by so many of my dreams. I guess this might have been more of a daydream. :)
5 Years Ago
So many lines are lovely in your poem. It is a Keeper.
truly, Pat
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..