WISPY * W O R L D S * of * WONDERLAND

You are a poem painted wine blush

Richly on canvas rhythm, lavender lips

Lightness of hands, fingers caress.

           

Your name paints rose petal kisses

Across my lifted neck, as the shy sun

Licks drops from my sea-salt skin.

 

You are hues of rivers and rains

Tints and shades of desert-rift ripeness

Mountain-valley birdsong in mists.

 

Your colors dab-dropped on landscape

Across the azure sky, stroke on slow stroke

Olive and emerald on richest forest flower.

 

You are wispy worlds of wonderland

And the wind in two-toned lilac summers

Loves to dance in your sky-soft hair.

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Soft as the sun and winds embrace ..speckled lace ...soft transparent eternal embrace ...beautiful 🌹

[lightsong]

One of Your finest pieces which I had the pleasure to read, my favorite, here is Your wondrous world is unfolding to our imagination and senses, the best I love about it is the word "worlds" yes not only one world, but many vast endless different ones where You are still swimming, soaring, diving, to explore more and more...

[An owl on the moon]

I am so thrilled to see you finding these worlds in my words. Thank you so much, dear Light. You bring joy in your presence.

[Karmee]

your poem of love just drips off the page, ink overflowing with honey. Very powerful love poem. Wonderful imagery is within the words you have penned. You are one poetic person.

[Grace]

This is so enchantingly beautiful and the imagery second to none. A poem every woman would love to own,
Quite magical. You have been given a great gift.

Grace.

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate your kindness so deeply. It is more enchanted than almost anything else. :)

[Grace]

I meant every word. It's delightful.
Grace

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow what a portrait you have painted here...she is breathtaking to look at, imagine..appreciate...
the last stanza just blew me away...i wish i could write like that...damn.
really creative imagery...
j.

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, my friend, your words always amaze me. Thank you for sharing some of them here on my page. :)

[emmajoy]

'Your name paints rose petal kisses - Across my lifted neck, as the shy sun - Licks drops from my sea-salt skin.'

As you have over many years your ' Wispy *Worlds* of Wonderland include phrases from a truly magical, sensual and radiant masterpiece. Your Alice couldn't have a finer creator. Beautiful

[An owl on the moon]

Funny story... at least 12 years ago when I was just starting out on this site, if a certain emmajoy came to review my poetry, I knew it was a good day. Things haven't changed. Thank you for that! :)

[Chris Shaw]

A love poem, and an incredibly beautiful ones. Your imagery is from heaven itself. You evoke the senses with this write and you have given this reader a scented bouquet.

Chris

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Chris. Sometimes words can become the worlds we always longed for. :)

[Neville]

These words as I do meander slow through them yet again do indeed conjour up some of the most spectacular and beautiful images in my own head... and for that, I thank you muchly my friend.... All Good Things, Neville

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, Neville, thank you so much for meandering here. Your moments are always most welcome!

[Neville]

Nowt but a pleasure sir, and that, it be all mine :)

[Mrudula Rani]

A wispy wonderland Mother Nature made so delicately, lending all her laxurious treasure in measure.
" you are hues of rivers and rain " ... what a tribute it is to be compared to, "Tints and shades of desert- rift ripeness Mountain-valley birdsong in mist.
Always a spectacular treat to enjoy your poetry, Querido Craig. Muito bonito, Como sempre .

[An owl on the moon]

Muito obrigado, querida Mrudula. I always appreciate your insights into the world of words. In life we can find so much to lift us. :)

[Mrudula Rani]

A prazer é todo meu. Uma abraço.

[thetish]

Ahhh, just breathtaking, as always. Thank you for sharing your work, dear poet.

[An owl on the moon]

It really is a joy to share words with you here, dear friend. Thank you.