Very beautiful and insightful! I really love the thought of dreaming of such things...knowing this will be in a collection called "Wonderland" makes it even better. I really enjoyed the imagery and hidden thoughts which were spoken here. "I reach for you in my dreams...", that would have to be my favorite line. Quite lovely, yet delicate to the audience. Happy New Year and can't wait for more!
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Ah, thank you so much dear poet! So glad to have you by... especially here at the New Year. Wishing .. read moreAh, thank you so much dear poet! So glad to have you by... especially here at the New Year. Wishing you the best! :)
“The touch of your soft skin’s lullaby”. One of the most romantic sighs I have ever read... poetry as fragile as an eggshell is a nest of provocative chicks. Truly, Pat
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Oh your kindness is so sweet, Pat. Thank you! Happy New Year... :)
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dear 🦉 Owl... you are so wise beyond your years... Haapy New Year 2019. As ever, Pat
I woke this morning gloomy...burdened and unrested...until I stumbled upon a wonderland...where the beauty warms my soul and sunshine feels like it shooting through your eyes. Thank you dear soul keeper for sharing your beams over my desolate landfill. This poem is hope! Your a wondrous poetic friend...know that always :) Happy New Year Owl!
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What a high honor to have her majesty speak such sweet words. Thank you, precious Queen. This year i.. read moreWhat a high honor to have her majesty speak such sweet words. Thank you, precious Queen. This year it is all for Wonderland... tea and all will be kept warm for you. Happy New Year! :)
great work, sweet essence of love and unwilling to hold on to worldly things is making a fine combination.....thanks much for sharing thought provoking lines.
sneh c:
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Dear Sneh, thank you for sharing this first part of your New Year here. Your words always bring joy... read moreDear Sneh, thank you for sharing this first part of your New Year here. Your words always bring joy. :)
The first and last stanzas touch me the most but this piece is ethereal on the whole. Lovely one to start your new year postings with :)
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So grateful for your visit, dear Yumna. Thankful for your kindness pouring into this new year. May y.. read moreSo grateful for your visit, dear Yumna. Thankful for your kindness pouring into this new year. May yours be a Wonderland. :)
A delicious, love filled promise for a brand new year! Sweet love song, breathtakingly beautiful. I hope your New Year is filled with lovely dreams and desires that will all come true in the wonderland!
Feliz ano novo meu Querido. Desejo de você tudo de bom! Uma grande abraço.
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So happy to have you here, Mrudula! Muito obrigado! Hoping that too... my heart finds such peace in .. read moreSo happy to have you here, Mrudula! Muito obrigado! Hoping that too... my heart finds such peace in Wonderland... Feliz ano novo minha querida! Que todo dia seja cheio de alegria. Uma grande abraço.
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Meu Querido amigo, desejo você uma ano novo cheio de felicidades e paz. Dear Craig, I do hope you .. read moreMeu Querido amigo, desejo você uma ano novo cheio de felicidades e paz. Dear Craig, I do hope you find all that your heart desires in wonderland.
Very beautiful and insightful! I really love the thought of dreaming of such things...knowing this will be in a collection called "Wonderland" makes it even better. I really enjoyed the imagery and hidden thoughts which were spoken here. "I reach for you in my dreams...", that would have to be my favorite line. Quite lovely, yet delicate to the audience. Happy New Year and can't wait for more!
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Ah, thank you so much dear poet! So glad to have you by... especially here at the New Year. Wishing .. read moreAh, thank you so much dear poet! So glad to have you by... especially here at the New Year. Wishing you the best! :)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
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