Silent circling
seabirds stroke the air. Beneath their shadows granite statues line
the shore.
This
girl with her golden hair speaks with her eyes and hands but I cannot
hear. The brilliance of light engulfs us.
Alabaster walls;
a cardinal ceiling.
Solemn statues fill the void.
I turn to her eyes.
Eyes of hunger, eyes of rage,
a dying horror in a cage.
Freedom cries without a voice;
a muted scream to stain her choice.
“Be
honest in your waking times or the truth will haunt your dreams.”
“You
speak...I did not know you were able.”
“I
have always spoken. You simply could not understand. But
I am dream fabric here. In this place, the impossible is
probable. This moment is yours.” With this she turns to
face a statue and becomes stone.
“Please. Would
you speak to me again? Why do I find you here?” I
say. “Here in this wasteland I am barren and empty. Have
you no word for me?”
Grey
stone becomes flesh.
“A pebble thrown in a pool
may ripple from end to end,
but tossed into the sea,
it is swallowed by enormity.”
A
screaming silence surrounds us. The waves claw the shore in hushed
strokes. My words claw at my throat. “In silent words,
you speak so much.”
“And
you, though you speak volumes, say precious little. Don’t you know
that words are actors set in motion, and you are the
playwright. They can create a mood of harmony or destroy peace in
violent isolation. Words are civilians or soldiers; artists or autocrats;
worshippers or pagans. They make you rich or sell you into
poverty. Master them and you rule, or be mastered by them and
serve.”
August has big shoes to fill. Warm days, bright skies, and the promise of a harvest. But it cannot chase away the blues, if anything its harsh temperatures steal what hope we have.
I see this poem with beach at feet and an endless sky of blue as a weary voice weak from stress declares these words from you.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I am so glad to have you by again, dear Cherrie. Thank you!
This is why I read. To find a paragraph as perfect as this one:
“And you, though you speak volumes, say precious little. Don’t you know that words are actors set in motion, and you are the playwright. They can create a mood of harmony or destroy peace in violent isolation. Words are civilians or soldiers; artists or autocrats; worshippers or pagans. They make you rich or sell you into poverty. Master them and you rule, or be mastered by them and serve.”
A tiny correction. 'worshipers' has only one P. Other than that small slip of the finger...perfection. BRAVO.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
So deeply appreciative of your words, of your encouragement. Now wishing you such joy as autumn grow.. read moreSo deeply appreciative of your words, of your encouragement. Now wishing you such joy as autumn grows more brilliant in every transforming leaf.
A stirring presentation. I love the contrasting formats, and the way your words illuminate the page they're on.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much, dear poet. You might not be surprised that these words were inspired by my life i.. read moreThank you so much, dear poet. You might not be surprised that these words were inspired by my life in California... or lives it would seem. :)
I like how this reminds me of a poem and words. Great rhmes. I think about John goodman and how he handles pomes. like a champ. very paradise, you rock, awesome happy time.
I you good!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you for your words, and for stopping here to read my poetry. Looking forward to reading your i.. read moreThank you for your words, and for stopping here to read my poetry. Looking forward to reading your inspirations soon. :)
My words claw at my throat. “In silent words, you speak so much.”
Love this because it speaks of truth, I think words claw at each of us from time to time. This is deep and so true. I rarely think there is not really inner peace in anybody. We could search a life time for that. Awesome writing here.
This feels a bit harsh to me, which is an unexpected response to your writing. Usually I'm in a more soothing state of acceptance when reading you, but here I came away feeling that no matter what one says or how it's said, the words are not going to be well-received. Like being in a no-win situation, which causes me to clam up. Not sure if you crafted your message for this effect or if I'm an unusual reader to get this sensation from your words. I don't mean any of this as a critique, but just as feedback on how this comes across to me . . . your writing is well-crafted & compelling, as always! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Hi dear Margie. I realize it can be disjointed posting fragments of the whole through this year... .. read moreHi dear Margie. I realize it can be disjointed posting fragments of the whole through this year... knowing they do not always flow just right or speak the whole message from the book. But remembering this writing, back when my soul was in a deep darkness, it was meant to represent the manic glimmering places of me. Thank you for your honesty, and always appreciated. (((HUGS))) Craig :)
You never leave me empty...always full with thoughts, dreams, and deep introspective...I find a serenity in your wonderland that escapes me in the the knowing world. Thank you for bringing to light an inner peace that is tangible within my soul .....namaste
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Namaste, dear Queenie. It is wondrous to have you step into this dark wonderland of my world. So tha.. read moreNamaste, dear Queenie. It is wondrous to have you step into this dark wonderland of my world. So thankful you still return and find the tea and scones always warm.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
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