Reeds grabble and grope
on a distant shore; long since washed away. Smells, at once sweet and
repulsive brush the air. Deep emerald vines weave tapestry and lace across the
sand.
Playful footsteps, a
child’s footsteps
dance over mud and mire.
What seems a horror to
eyes of age,
brings joy to a child’s
fire.
She stares out to sea. The reeds
seem to carry her across the marsh in an unhindered dance.
“If I could know now what
I will,
or see now what I shall,
oh, what a wonderful
vision of hope it would be.”
Spinning and laughter fill her mind as
she turns toward the blazing sun. Before her stand four stone walls:
Scarlet to think by;
crimson to grow;
cardinal to dream by;
ruby to know.
On each wall, a crystal
door. Through each door, a sacred path. In silence she grasps at the
way.
The four stone walls hold four crystal doors, All the four doors are hiding wisdom essential for development of a soul to its full potential. One needs to open all the doors to know the purpose of life, but must not be obsessed only with one choice. Wonderful and wise knowledge filled in your writings.
Eu não tenho bastante português para explicar que eu sentou-se. Suas poesias são fora de série. Adorei muito. Uma grande abraço. Tudo de bom.
Muito obrigado! Yes... it is true... we are presented with so many choices... every day. Some are si.. read moreMuito obrigado! Yes... it is true... we are presented with so many choices... every day. Some are simple. And some transform our lives forever. Suas palavras de bondade sempre me enchem de alegria. Que esta semana lhe traga inspiração e paz em tudo que fizer. Um grande abraço.
6 Years Ago
Obrigada, agradeço muito. Desejaria ti uma grande semana de muitas felicidades.
6 Years Ago
Que a alegria venha para nós dois esta semana, querido poeta!
I like your word choice, "grabble & grope", "emerald vines weave tapestry", "lacing the sand". However, my personal opinion is that I don't like how "footsteps" was repeated. How exactly does spinning "fill" her mind? Maybe a different word choice? I absolutely love the verse that includes the various shades of red & how it rhymes, it's fantastic.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I am so grateful for your kindness in reading and offering your insights. May you continue to enjoy .. read moreI am so grateful for your kindness in reading and offering your insights. May you continue to enjoy your moments here.
The four stone walls hold four crystal doors, All the four doors are hiding wisdom essential for development of a soul to its full potential. One needs to open all the doors to know the purpose of life, but must not be obsessed only with one choice. Wonderful and wise knowledge filled in your writings.
Eu não tenho bastante português para explicar que eu sentou-se. Suas poesias são fora de série. Adorei muito. Uma grande abraço. Tudo de bom.
Muito obrigado! Yes... it is true... we are presented with so many choices... every day. Some are si.. read moreMuito obrigado! Yes... it is true... we are presented with so many choices... every day. Some are simple. And some transform our lives forever. Suas palavras de bondade sempre me enchem de alegria. Que esta semana lhe traga inspiração e paz em tudo que fizer. Um grande abraço.
6 Years Ago
Obrigada, agradeço muito. Desejaria ti uma grande semana de muitas felicidades.
6 Years Ago
Que a alegria venha para nós dois esta semana, querido poeta!
The innocence of a child, will it be preserved or not. This is very dramatic not forced but cleverly delivered.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you, dear Cherrie. Sometimes I wonder what might have changed in the lives of those we read ab.. read moreThank you, dear Cherrie. Sometimes I wonder what might have changed in the lives of those we read about in the news had another door been opened for them.
6 Years Ago
The balance between survival and death is so slight it does make you wonder
I must say. THIS IS WRITTEN SO BEAUTIFULLY!!
oh my, I wish I could write something like this. I really admire your way of presenting it Craig. Always a pleasure to read your work. =")
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
You encourage my heart so much! Coming to read your inspirations in moments. Always so rich and deep.. read moreYou encourage my heart so much! Coming to read your inspirations in moments. Always so rich and deep. :)
6 Years Ago
Oh thank you Craig. Seniors like you always help and motivate me to do better.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..