A Shrine to Fragments of Light

A song to Spring…

Long lay the slumberous winter

Clothed in shards of whimpering white

Barren and bleak, this desert wasteland

Until I sensed her verdant approach

Sweet sunlight on her soft shoulders

Robed in vibrant flowing fabrics

Tulip, crocus, and rose-petal threads

She is crowned in succulent birdsong

Flowering fields rise in her rippling wake

And she whispers the soft sigh of seed time

As Earth comes to life by her touch

Every petal a shrine to fragments of light.

Author's Note

“The deep roots never doubt spring will come.”
― Marty Rubin

Reviews

[Ghania]

This is the second time I've read this. And it took me to a whole new world. Your words always make me wander in the beauty of nature. I really, really love this one. And the picture though!!
Serene, soft, soothing. Loved it!

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, dear Ghania, thank you for your kindness! I do so love being outside, wandering to the little river near my home. Nature brings such peace. I am glad I can share it with you! :)

[Ghania]

Yeah. Nature is so soothing at times, always at your side.
Itsreally my pleasure to read amazing things coming from your side. Thank you for sharing them. Have a great day. =)

[Unspoken poet]

She is crowned in succulent birdsong
Flowering fields rise in her rippling wake
And she whispers the soft sigh of seed time
As Earth comes to life by her touch
Every petal a shrine to fragments of light.

I LOVED this part, so poetic and wonderful. Wonderful descriptiveness. Enjoyed your words.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, dear avani.

[Ghania]

"Every petal a shrine to fragments of light."
Your words are really magical. Enchanting and beautiful.

One might get lost in the vivid imagery you created. :P

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much dear poet. I do so hope you find enchanted places every day to get lost in. :)

[Ghania]

You're welcome. Ha ha. There are many( in my imagination) :P

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, those are the best places to find. :)

[AYVID N]

Never before did spring arrive adorned with such beauty. Her triumph is the triumph of goodness and abundance against adversity. I loved every stunning line. Amazing, breath taking and more.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, dear Divya. Spring is truly glorious, especially when it awakens in a soul that has been filled with winter.

[AYVID N]

I wish you innumerable such stunning, bright and colorful springs dear friend. May your soul be always filled with warmth and sunshine. You are most welcome always...

[Einstein Noodle]

the wood nymphs are gorgeous ;)
your poem is keep-able..into me ol' library it goes ...every word a taste treat for me ..i especially like how you give blustery ol' winter a solid whimpering as he is driven from our good earth for another season .. well done ..wouldn't change a thing ..smooth and luscious!
E.

[An owl on the moon]

I am so grateful for your thoughts and for slipping my poem into your library. May you find such wondrous joys all weekend. :)

[AprilRN1210]

your enchanting pen strikes again, or should I say keystrokes. I was so tickled at the alliteration you sprinkled in there as well. Spring is my second favorite season and was when I was born. New beginnings and magic. If I had these sensual whispers I would wake up too, lucky spring.. nicely done as always Craig.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, April. How the earth saw joy in the spring birth of you, dear poet. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh spring how we look no for it when the world is blanketed in white and frozen.

[An owl on the moon]

I so appreciate your words. Yes, spring is the song of hope to a cold, stark world.

[Hari Om]

This work of your left a very beautiful aura and fragrance ...

[An owl on the moon]

Truly appreciate your kindness.

[barleygirl]

Beautiful opening with the somber tones of winter, then quickly turning out the vivid imagery of springtime. Your word choices are excellent to convey a fluidity of observations, as the sounds of the words are as lyrical as the meanings are meaningful.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your lifting words. May you always find whispers of spring all around you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the last line is my favorite; it is magical without seeming out-of-touch with the romantic aspect of your words