Now this must be read aloud; or certainly in a whisper by Karloff or Price. And there must be dry ice.
This is dark but seeming light. Exactly how the subject is. I love the way you have melded format, subject and message in this multi layered piece.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Ken, so glad to have you by again! This came from the darkest places of me, though even there I reac.. read moreKen, so glad to have you by again! This came from the darkest places of me, though even there I reach for the light. Thank you my friend.
C Froman,
Such a complex layering of meaning within our inner selves. Humanity is always growing or stagnating. This was an interesting focus on being caught up in a place of shadow. Then to find it's opposite side is the final hope. Bless you much Kathy
Thank you so much for your light here, Kathy. Wishing you such joy and peace for your new year, and .. read moreThank you so much for your light here, Kathy. Wishing you such joy and peace for your new year, and so much hope in each day.
7 Years Ago
C. Froman,
How wonderful to read and absorb positive words from others such as yours! I am g.. read moreC. Froman,
How wonderful to read and absorb positive words from others such as yours! I am glad your voice is in the world. Keep speaking. Bless you.
There are no shadows at night, save those cast by the illumination of guttered street lamps; but there are dark corners where our greatest fears ever dwell, which were my thoughts as I read these lines.
Beccy.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes, so true. Thank you Beccy. And how there are dark places within that hide from the light.
7 Years Ago
Than you and appreciate the views of Beccy. It matches with my view.
Loved the poem, sounded like a familiar music. Reality may shed some rays of light somewhat undesirable for a dreamer. Only when the moon and sun come to terms will the moon sparkle more and the sun sing . Like the shifting sky, I like to beliebe pain is mutable. Hope you're well C Froman.
Lots of love
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Obrigado, amiga! These words came from a very dark place in me, but I am doing much better now. Send.. read moreObrigado, amiga! These words came from a very dark place in me, but I am doing much better now. Sending love and light across the sea. :)
I feel the first drop and first impression looks best(as per saying first impression is best impress.. read moreI feel the first drop and first impression looks best(as per saying first impression is best impression), because we never introduced to them, but the one that lasts and stays best ever is the best in your darkest corner,
this is out of my personal experience, may not be matching with your views Craig.
7 Years Ago
sorry mistaken, may be*
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your comments and blessed words.
A very strong and haunting poem. I felt the dark shadows passing me by as I read this.
Well written poem. Has a powerful feel to it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I so appreciate your kindness, dear poet. This one came from a very dark place inside me. May the dr.. read moreI so appreciate your kindness, dear poet. This one came from a very dark place inside me. May the dreams always find a way to live.
A very well written poem. What fills your heart indeed...the interplay of light and dark weaves a tone that plays at the back of the mind like midnight blues. Good write
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your insights, Ted. Appreciate you stopping to read.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
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