“This is love: to fly toward a secret sky, to cause a hundred veils to fall each moment. First to let go of life. Finally, to take a step without feet.”
― Rumi
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A amazing poem. The poem felt like a secret and private whisper.
"Listen
Listen to the threads snapping
To the screams of our prison
Breaking apart"
The above lines tender and with great meaning. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
This one came from a deep soul place, my friend. Thank you for your kind comments, always.
We miss the point of life a lot, as humans. We have this race that we want to win, that we never agreed to be a part of, we just find ourselves running one day and if we're thinkers, we realize that we're bound by these intangible things and we create our own prisons. I think everyone's prison is different, but I know that for me, I'm becoming more brave and unafraid to be myself. I always wanted wings. I always wanted to fly.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
haha, I didn't see that I read this a while back.
7 Years Ago
I am so glad you came back! Hoping that your week is filled with flying, soaring into places of free.. read moreI am so glad you came back! Hoping that your week is filled with flying, soaring into places of freedom for you. As I was walking yesterday, I began contemplating how we are all flying on a small rock through the vastness of space, and yet we blind ourselves to such petty things, and fight and hate and hurt others. What a miracle to even exist on such a big blue marble adrift in the universe. :)
Wow...another poem that just grabs the reader by the heart, shakes, then sets us down gently with a kiss on the cheek.
Love this line: When we are no longer bound to reputation/Bound by constructs of the world
And this: Listen to the threads snapping/To the screams of our prison/Breaking apart
So very rich in imagery...so much depth and passion.
Perhaps my favorite line of all is the closing one: Time to fly fierce into the heavens
I love the concept of that...flying fierce into the heavens...wow.
Reminds me of Thomas's: Do not go gentle into that good night/Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Beautifully penned poem, C.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Such kind, uplifting thoughts, and to even be uttered in the same breath as Dylan Thomas is beyond u.. read moreSuch kind, uplifting thoughts, and to even be uttered in the same breath as Dylan Thomas is beyond unspeakable joy. I hope my words above will one day be more than mere words. For now, i do so hope you are stretching your wings, ready to consume the sky with your soaring.
C Froman,
This was a vulnerable honest voice. Meaningful because it is our very weakness and brokenness that we find hope and commonality with one another. Like a caterpillar between crawling and fluttering............in a chrysalis dream. Yes I get it. Its easy to stay there but it is a dream and not reality. Threads snapping, prison breaking apart. Yes we all want this. Beautiful work Blessings Kathy
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I so deeply appreciate your comments and your lifting heart, dear Kathy. Thank you! Blessings on you.. read moreI so deeply appreciate your comments and your lifting heart, dear Kathy. Thank you! Blessings on your week as it sweetens into weekend wonders.
8 Years Ago
Cfroman,
What a nice note from you, very thoughtful! Kathy
Such poetic truths you breathe, your voice is beautifully resounding, but dear poet, it is always darkest before the dawn. A great awakening is sure to come, for some I hope its not to late
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Oh dear lynn, I almost missed your comments. Thank you so much, my friend. This has become an endles.. read moreOh dear lynn, I almost missed your comments. Thank you so much, my friend. This has become an endless winter, but the stars are beautiful.
I appreciate your thoughts so much. I was lost in a cocoon for some 10 years, so I strongly agree wi.. read moreI appreciate your thoughts so much. I was lost in a cocoon for some 10 years, so I strongly agree with you.
8 Years Ago
i think I am still lost in one, or would like to be locked in one just for a while that is.
8 Years Ago
In this overwhelming darkness, may your wings grow so fierce and strong.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..