In Mists and Madness

In Mists and Madness

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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I find myself holding onto mist

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© 2016 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
The wailing owl screams solitary to the mournful moon. – David Mallet

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You like Owls, Don't you?

Well, I suppose they are as good as any animals. Something about their eyes just screams intelligence. Heck, what not to like.

As to the poem itself,
Once more you poke at the right points. Evoking thought and emotion.
I've learned, with your poems, that it is best to read them aloud to fully let them do their work.
You have a talent, that's a given.

I wish I could give more insightful remarks, but my poetry skills begin and end with rhymes. While I can enjoy, I'm not that good when it comes to improvement.

Still,
Thank you for the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

My friend, it is so good to have you by again. Thank you so much for your insights, and your uplifti.. read more
LastMonth

8 Years Ago

Life is simple friend.
Write, and I'll read.



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I must confess, Froman, your language is brilliant. Well articulated.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

I deeply appreciate your lifting comments, my friend. :)
A beautiful offering.I love owls,myself.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I love them too. :)
This is the first piece of yours I have read. Wow! Awe inspiring and beautiful. I live on a farm in NJ and the mist in the early morning and late at night seems like a blanket stretching out endlessly. There is really something mystical within it. Beautiful work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Your kindness lifted me from a Monday mist. Thank you so much, denise! :)
denise

8 Years Ago

Aww...that makes my heart smile!! You're very welcome!
I have two owls that perch atop my tree every fall....they carry me through wintery nights. I must ask them this year their names.....before they screech and return to the mists.. lovely as always my friend to dream the haunting of your wonderlands...my heart is always full.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Autumn does have a way of haunting the air. May the owls confess their secrets to you before they go.. read more
There is a special sort of mournful peace feeling throughout this one. The presentation is stunning. Craig, you have outdone yourself. Lydi**


Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Yes, there is a certain mourning in the mists. Thank you for sharing your words and time, dear Lydi... read more
Such a moving piece here, Quite enjoyed this

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your lifting words.
A very moving and enchanting poem. Has a surreal feel to it, something wild and ancient that we strive to reach, perhaps we make it, perhaps we don't. I really like the title too. Very impressive poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

I am so glad you came by to read into the wildness. Thank you. I have been looking for owls in the m.. read more
Miss Owl

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. I hope you find some. :)
Craig your poetry is so lyrical that it is an effortless read. I love that line ‘holding on to the mist’ beautiful and sorrowful. It spoke to me...

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Oh dear Sue, forgive my late response. My soul has been wandering. Thank you for your kind words. wi.. read more
Holding on to mist, a profound metaphor. One can almost see the individual trying to prolong the enviable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Howard. As my poetry becomes more autobiographical, these mists become more subst.. read more
Lovely. Always loved owls and their mournful cry. You portray this well. A soulful write that was greatly enjoyed. My complements!

Rick

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

I so appreciate seeing you here again, Rick! Thank you! I hope all is well with you, my friend.

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