Well, I suppose they are as good as any animals. Something about their eyes just screams intelligence. Heck, what not to like.
As to the poem itself,
Once more you poke at the right points. Evoking thought and emotion.
I've learned, with your poems, that it is best to read them aloud to fully let them do their work.
You have a talent, that's a given.
I wish I could give more insightful remarks, but my poetry skills begin and end with rhymes. While I can enjoy, I'm not that good when it comes to improvement.
Still,
Thank you for the read.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
My friend, it is so good to have you by again. Thank you so much for your insights, and your uplifti.. read moreMy friend, it is so good to have you by again. Thank you so much for your insights, and your uplifting thoughts. And yes, my first novel was called An Owl on the Moon. It speaks so much of my soul, living in the lonely, haunted places. And yet, I do find light in the strangest places. Wishing you such a beautiful, inspired week.
Your poems are hauntingly beautiful.
There is something mysterious and other-worldly about them...something that draws the reader inside and allows us to step into another world. Another time. Another memory.
I could read this all day. Beautiful.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
And you lift my soul again with your light. Than you so much. May you always find beautiful mystery .. read moreAnd you lift my soul again with your light. Than you so much. May you always find beautiful mystery all around you, and within.
Froman,
To breathe in the commonality with nature and wildness. I came from reading this with a feeling of encouragement to continue thinking and being just who I am whether sophisticated or not. Nature has a heartbeat after all. Blessings to you Kathy
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Your words are so appreciated, Kathy. And yes, please, let inspiration only ever awaken your soul's .. read moreYour words are so appreciated, Kathy. And yes, please, let inspiration only ever awaken your soul's unique voice more each day.
This is very difficult to read (too tiny & not enuf contrast between words & background) . . . but worth the effort, becuz your words are gracefully stated with nicely-flowing alliteration: "where the white owl whispers" . . . "on misted moving mountains" . . . and I particular relate to the ending: "ancient echoes of ancient sighs" . . . so many of the sensations I feel when spending time out in nature.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for reading, even with the misted letters and lines. Appreciate your uplifting com.. read moreThank you so much for reading, even with the misted letters and lines. Appreciate your uplifting comments, always, and want your weekend so filled with grace and joy. :)
I so love it when light pierces the darkness, it sets the mind wandering, sometimes it's the images that captivates one, Just like the wise ole owl. Interesting read and write, love it
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