Amazing and beautiful words shared my friend.
"You lifted the veil
The mask of me
And gave me a cup to drink
Taking me to a silver slumber in shadows"
I loved the above lines. We rarely lift the veil to show real face. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
It seems that a very long winter has set up camp around me, my friend, but thankful for your company.. read moreIt seems that a very long winter has set up camp around me, my friend, but thankful for your company. Wishing you such a beautiful new year of life and joy.
C Froman,
"this wildness of winter waiting" I love your intricate thougt connections! Yes we do all touch one another with our lives. The deep relationships are the most satisfying and most scary at times. Your story was a true thermostat of temperature brought about by relationship. Love it for sure. Thank you for allowing me a weak effort at understanding. Blessings in your life and wonderful writing. Kathy
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Oh thank you Kathy! You understood so well how one life can become summer for us, and melt away the .. read moreOh thank you Kathy! You understood so well how one life can become summer for us, and melt away the bitter chill of life's winter.
There is so much to love about this poem...so many lines I'd like to point out that spoke to me.
It's beautiful, as is all your work, but this piece also has an ancient feel to it...as if the reader has just stepped back to an ancient time of sorcery, maidens, knights, and mystery. Perhaps, of all the lines I enjoyed, this one spoke the loudest:
And yet I live/For seasons are not stone/They are alive in me/With all the echoes of you.
They are alive in me...with all the echoes of you....wow. That is incredibly beautiful.
Loved this!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for commenting on my sad autobiography. You make it seem so much more than it is. .. read moreThank you so much for commenting on my sad autobiography. You make it seem so much more than it is. Much appreciated, dear poet!
Wow! I literally just fell in love with this poem. The portrayal, the description and the little details were just amazing. Especially the last part was loaded with emotions. Amazing
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Benjamin! Your words lifted my soul today.
Loved it.
"But the waves came by night
And carried me far from your eyes
I woke in this nightmare called Distance
Saw that vessels crossing the sea leave no trail
For you to follow home to me"
this part was painful to read, as I have recently experienced the tragedy of distance that ruined my relationship. Beautiful words :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Oh, dear Marina, you saw clearly my pain, and I am so sorry for your suffering. I know too well such.. read moreOh, dear Marina, you saw clearly my pain, and I am so sorry for your suffering. I know too well such sadness. May beauty inspire and lift you this week.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..