It has a very eerie feel to it which is nice because the feelings that you want to portay in painful desire ID liketo call it, was very well expressed. It was very soulful and something even i could relate to. Very well done !
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
This came from a dark place in me. I deeply appreciate your thoughts, my friend.
8 Years Ago
No problem, I too had those same desires after reading a book that involved the death of someone I r.. read moreNo problem, I too had those same desires after reading a book that involved the death of someone I refused to accept had died. I get really into it if like a certain a book haha.
Your spirituality shines in this one, Craig....but I also see respect for those who have gone before us. Our ancestors fought difficult lives in order for us to live as we do today. Powerful poetry. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I so appreciate your comments, dear Lydi. Wishing you such a beautiful week to come.
A sobering poem my friend.
"Silent stones of granite hue;
Enveloped now in sacred dew.
Speak somber words of restless hope
Of Resurrection..."
I like the above lines. Look upon the dead with respect. One day we shall join them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend. It is always a joy to have you by. Have a blessed weekend.
8 Years Ago
You are welcome my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Such a darkness in your words, CF., and yet appropriate.. certainly the 'restless hope.. ' - one can be hope and pray..
' Remember the fallen, the slain; -- Their dust is our foundation. -- ',. Methinks the greatest of all, He who lives in our hearts yet...
As always wonderful poetry, appropriate for the time...
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, dear Emma. This was written during a deep darkness, and somehow, as on Easter mor.. read moreThank you so much, dear Emma. This was written during a deep darkness, and somehow, as on Easter morning, there was that faint glimmer of hope as dawn swallowed the night. May you find such joy in this sacred, beautiful day.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..