“And when two such people encounter each other, and their eyes meet, the past and the future become unimportant. There is only that moment, and the incredible certainty that everything under the sun has been written by one hand only. It is the hand that evokes love, and creates a twin soul for every person in the world. Without such love, one's dreams would have no meaning.”
― Paulo Coelho, The Alchemist
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This is so amazing! The language you use is what's the most astonishing . . . each word carefully selected for maximum sound (into lyrical groupings, with well-done alliteration & other crafting) & also for sensory meaning for your overall seductive message of dreamy possibly unattainable romantic love. I also like the way the whole thing is kinda circular, ending up where it started.
I am so grateful for your words, dear poet! Your comments lift me. I do so long to find the dream aw.. read moreI am so grateful for your words, dear poet! Your comments lift me. I do so long to find the dream awakened in the end; to somehow find home one day.
7 Years Ago
I admire you for still having what it takes to dream this dream. I'm afraid I'm hopelessly jaded now.. read moreI admire you for still having what it takes to dream this dream. I'm afraid I'm hopelessly jaded nowadays. I forget to even dream it, that's why I never write about it! *sigh!* (((HUGS)))
7 Years Ago
Maybe new dreams will awaken in the new year for you. I realize that sometimes they're all I have.. .. read moreMaybe new dreams will awaken in the new year for you. I realize that sometimes they're all I have.. (((HUGS)))
I've always been a dreamer since I was young & even as I've grown up, I've learned that there's no harm in dreaming. It helps me seek out a secret place & cherish little things. When we fall in love, we're taken to a new dream which we happen to live in real time. So, I guess we'd be day dreamers then. Love takes us on such a ride where we live our own story, build it & make it reality. I marvel your touching, euphoric words written & they've made me believe that anything is possible, that love has no limits...in the end, we are all dreamers, but who ever said that was a bad thing?
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Your kind, uplifting words made me smile. Yes, sometimes the dreams can carry through the haunting m.. read moreYour kind, uplifting words made me smile. Yes, sometimes the dreams can carry through the haunting mists, until we reach the shore and can make the dreams come alive for real. May you find such endless dreams awakening for you, dear poet.
8 Years Ago
I also was drawn in by the title of this! One of my favorite bands is coming out with a new album an.. read moreI also was drawn in by the title of this! One of my favorite bands is coming out with a new album and it's titled "A Place For Us to Dream". But I fell in love with the title you thought of. I will be sure to keep having smooth dreams that I can fall in love with over & over again.
"Here the stars are held in deepest embrace
By the ebony night’s hush"
My favorite lines. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Your comments and presence are much appreciated, Fahmida. Wishing you endless joys for your weekend... read moreYour comments and presence are much appreciated, Fahmida. Wishing you endless joys for your weekend.
All I can say is that this is simply beautiful. Dream.. Yes! We all live in a dream.. that's a world that only we are familiar with. And this poem so perfectly describes that world where anything can happen. The most beautiful part of this poem is that you have seen your love in your dream and she has given you a whlole new perspective about love. That's simply awesome.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Dear Kanishka, such a joy to have you reading my poetry. Yes, sometimes to endure the madness of the.. read moreDear Kanishka, such a joy to have you reading my poetry. Yes, sometimes to endure the madness of the world, we must find our peace with those we love in these dreamworlds. Wishing you such a glorious weekend.
We are all dreamers, and we accomplish in this life through dreams, it can be in sleep or it can be awaken, but everything we do comes from a dream... I loved the concept of this write... Very insightful and thought provoking...
Sincerely
Dhiman
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
So appreciate your thoughts and your kindness, Dhiman. May you find such endless dreams awakening al.. read moreSo appreciate your thoughts and your kindness, Dhiman. May you find such endless dreams awakening all around you.
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..