A story laced in starlit thread

A story laced in starlit thread

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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The illuminations

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Star

Severed

Torn in two

The illuminations

Now housed in flesh

Wandering over endless ages

One aroused as a dark dragon’s whisper

The other an awakening woman with woven wings

And both endlessly seeking the other’s light

Both needing to find their way home

In timeless echoes their radiance

Now hunts halcyon days

Lilting movements

Lissome sighs

Converging

Fusing

Star

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© 2016 An owl on the moon


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Congratulations for the Consolation Medal for this poem....
cheers... :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the contest! Much appreciated! :)
Whispered love that extends to the endless universe. If you could put colors on threads of energy, this would be it. Dark, light, soft, gentle, hard. It pulses. Lovely Craig. You are a favorite for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear Seriana. Aching today for the dream to awaken somehow. May your weekend be endlessly .. read more
Such a shame that not everyone in this world has such a beautiful story to tell.

Superb poem and you are a fortunate man.

T

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend. I can only be thankful the story has not yet ended, so there is a light on the.. read more
Artwork and words are amazing. The set-up and the shape of the poem added to the strength of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

My friend, it is always so wonderful to have you by! Thank you for encouraging me over the years.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
Oh Craig! This is a lovely piece! Makes me ache for someone!
Loved how beautifully you painted the phenomenon of twin souls, their never ending urge to find each other and thus their home.
Awesome! *_*

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Oh, dear Jyoti! You understood so well. Yes, this is my autobiography, and it aches on its pathway .. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

I wish you to be home!
My pleasure!
your writing is actually soooooooooooo inspiring and the style and emotions are bounded with the fact and phase of your poem...i liked it...

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

So appreciated, my friend. This one is deeply personal to me, so I am thankful you felt the soul of .. read more
just wow :) ... superb... i would like to learn to write like you

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

You are so alive in your words already. This one is nearest my life's story, and it's still unfoldin.. read more
Ardra

8 Years Ago

thank you :) ... your life's story seems so far too interesting with all the stars and dragons :P .. read more
An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your kindness so deeply. And yes, there is much unseen in all our lives that is like a ma.. read more
Story that .. laced in starlit thread? .. looks certainly way adoring in words.
"Both needing to find their way home
In timeless echoes their radiance... "

.. makes me writing:

" .. two livings, one bud
two kaleidoscopic bodies, but one heart
illuminations burst up.. in the sky
perhaps, livings aroused outta starlit, lost/fallen on earth."

Extra-ordinary piece of art. Undoubtedly... impeccable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Ah, my friend! Thank you for always showing such kindness to my thoughts; to my life story that is t.. read more
The imagery is dazzling in this superb shape poem. Beautifully written...and constructed. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Lydi, I truly appreciate your kindness and lifting soul. :)

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