A story laced in starlit thread

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Star

Severed

Torn in two

The illuminations

Now housed in flesh

Wandering over endless ages

One aroused as a dark dragon’s whisper

The other an awakening woman with woven wings

And both endlessly seeking the other’s light

Both needing to find their way home

In timeless echoes their radiance

Now hunts halcyon days

Lilting movements

Lissome sighs

Converging

Fusing

Star

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

Such a finely formatted poem. For me, Its lay-out suggests a gradual increase of affection leading to a passionate love then, calms into intimate friendship. In other words, the poem gently slip and slides through history then settle into an eternal place of beauty.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear emmjoy! Love how you see the poem as a living path of this world. :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I hope they manage to fuse together again happily. Good poem

[An owl on the moon]

I hope so too, with all my heart. Thank you! :)

[EyesFullOfHope]

Another masterpiece! How nicely you captured the feelings of soulmates looking for each other. It's magical!

[An owl on the moon]

You grasp the bonds of soulmates, woven with light. I hope you are always flooded with the sweet wonder of life all around you. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

An extraordinary write. A lovely treat for the senses, Craig:)

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear Pryde! I am glad to have you here again. :)

[Jess]

Excellent vocabulary and idea as well.
This is amazing! Brilliant work.

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, Jess, thank you! So appreciate you stopping here. :)

[Pax]

love this!!! the shape and the beauty it represent... simply wonderful!

[An owl on the moon]

My dear friend, so glad you are back! You have been missed here more than you know! :)

[Pax]

thank you.. me too.. i missed being here....

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Twin flames....always burning.....surreal

[An owl on the moon]

You know of twin flames... what magic awakens another world... everything is transformed. And this world? It fades into dreams.

[argentis]

This is really beautiful. I like the way you've shaped it, it matches the sentiment really well.

I'm glad they found their way home.

[An owl on the moon]

Much appreciated, argentis! And they will. The universe is leading them back. :)