Beautifully written.....The absence of capital letters and punctuation creates a flow - a flurry of emotion which would have been hampered by literary convention.
Considering the usual "original" expressions I have come to expect from you, the line "let me become your moon and stars" somehow did not give me the finale the lines prior to that predicted.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your lifting words and your beautiful honesty. May your new week bring you end.. read moreThank you so much for your lifting words and your beautiful honesty. May your new week bring you endless blessings.
Wow, i am all for feelings, and this sir was enchanting and the feelings rained all over me. Loved it, definitely reading it from time to time. ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I so deeply appreciate your comments, Errenn. Sometimes the brightest beauty flows through the darke.. read moreI so deeply appreciate your comments, Errenn. Sometimes the brightest beauty flows through the darkest of nights.
Wow, I forgot just how much I love your poetry... How could I right?! ;)
"Until I can make love to your darkness
And transform it into dawn"
Such a beautiful romantic line. This entire poem is laced with a dreamy heartfelt wish to love, deeply, intensely... So completely that it transforms not only darkness into a beautiful ribbon of light and color... But it transforms the heart. Absolutely gorgeous, my friend, but what else did I expect? Lol
So good to see you're still spilling love and beauty onto the page! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Dear Kalypso! You must know this place is never the same when you're away. Your enchanted voice belo.. read moreDear Kalypso! You must know this place is never the same when you're away. Your enchanted voice belongs here. Thank you for whispering such wondrous light over my dark world. :)
A brilliant write. So tender, so romantic and all consuming but in a soft loving way. Your words reflect so beautifully wonderful love can be. This is such a lovely poem how I do love it!!!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, dear poet! This flows from the deepest place in me. So glad you connected to it. :)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..