Into the midnight of you

In this storm of distant recollections

how I wish for light

to pour over you like endless rain

dripping over your soft skin

your loving soul

your restless, wild wings

for you are love to me

and I remember how

she placed you on my path

the angel with no name

who will always be with us

and I only ever want more of you

the day and night of your whispered world

until I can make love to your darkness

and transform it into dawn

kiss me into the midnight of you

let me become your moon and stars

breathe and be with me

just be.

Author's Note

I searched for the fabric of my soul, and found you woven into every fiber of me. - O

Reviews

[A. Kim Spradling]

The visualization in this poem is breathtaking. I am not sure I can find the words for this piece. It is beautiful and moves with softness. I am not sure that makes sense, but that is what it did to me.

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your thoughts, dear poet. This was from a secret place in me that is so distant now. Wishing you a blessed, beautiful weekend.

[APOORVA]

she placed you on my path
the angel with no name
who will always be with us
and I only ever want more of you
MY FAVORITE PORTION FROM YOUR PIECE, AN ANGEL WITH NO NAME...WOW ! BEAUTIFUL

[An owl on the moon]

Your words bring such joy! I deeply appreciate your kindness here. :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Cfroman,
"Into the midnight of you" was so transparent in its portrayal of the layers of dark and light within your heart towards another heart. Relationships are many times complex of memory- of expectations met and not. Love is the softening factor in how you drew so exactly what and how the angel of love placed intent of feeling to the subject of your heart. I would love to hear just the idea-person? behind this particular amazing poem although the writer's not was probably enough of an explanation. But if you would like to explain a little more.........hint, hint. Just loved it!! Blessings in your amazing writing life, Never stop for you have a wonderful gift. Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear Kathy! The words flowed from a glimpse into the darkness that comes before the dawn of twin flame passages. It is a learning to love even the night of another when your soul feels so isolated and alone.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Cfroman,
Okay now,that really helps me to see from your vantage point. "dawn of twin flame passages." Yes, as in working through a difficult experience-relationship- hanging in there to see it for what it is even if dark- difficult. That actually inspires me as I have been within a similar position myself. I think writing is such a wonderful outlet and healing process...............Blessings to you dear writer................Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

You understand so well. Yes, Kathy, it is a truly healing process. May it bring you much joy and peace on your beautiful journey into the new week. :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

It's neat to find commonality and I will never tire of these connections of understanding with others such as yourself. Keep being inspiring you writer lady you! Kathy

[Valentine]

Precious are these moments for those lucky enough to have found this. Valentine

[An owl on the moon]

Yes, and even on this journey home there is joy in the midnight. Thank you dear poet.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The light of love never dying...Dawn so near heaven....

[An owl on the moon]

Dear Queenie, sometimes I wonder if dawn has forgotten me. Thank you for shining your light here.

[Unspoken poet]

such a wonderful, beautiful write.

[T Passos]

Transcendental love. Beautiful...

[An owl on the moon]

Muito obrigado, amiga... abraço.

[thetish]

I am breathless reading your work. Literally and emotionally. Beautiful, deeply raw.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you dear poet. Sometimes my autobiography bleeds a little beauty.

[MOON]

Beautiful and delicately told , such inspirational lovely romantic write.

[An owl on the moon]

I so appreciate your kindness, MOON.

[barleygirl]

This is a graceful & original love poem! I embrace your lyrical dance between light & dark . . . tho a much-used theme, you've managed to impart it in a fresh way here. Your word crafting flows extremely well. Too many good parts to point out my faves! (((HUGS)))

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate your kind words so much! My poetry has all turned to autobiography, so I seem to live now in those midnight places seeking any starlight I can find.

[barleygirl]

Some of the best words of wisdom for writers: Write what we know. I've found that I get few fans when I try to write more "conventionally" . . . *wink! wink!*

[An owl on the moon]

Ahhhh, look at you go! Keep being you. :)