Dreams in Darkness Lay

All art requires courage ~ Anne Tucker

Dreams in darkness lay

in a watercolor tapestry

 

Dabbled words of sound,

drift dripping slowly down

 

Shades of what you do to me

on Dada landscapes of Ceylon tea

 

Gold leaf set in shelled smiles

abstract colors across the miles

 

Red sunrise cubist ribbon skies

in boundaries of soft abstract eyes

 

Revolutionary fires flow,

since caverns of dark Lascaux

 

Perceptions of canvass redirections

pigments in portrait blush deceptions

 

Still life brushed on impressionist fair

your roses painted red with care

 

Golden dreamish tones beget

the ever surrealist stroked sunset

 

I will ever always be

the faithful shadow in your sea .

Author's Note

Painting: "The Victory" - Panel 4 of "The Progress of a Soul" (1893-1901) by Phoebe Anna Traquair.

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The progression of the soul is our lesson daily...I believe we were put her to preform and perfect that ability in love, to cultivate that accurate measurement of forever. You have become a master...a teacher...a leader. your movement and flow both haunt and humble me,like few others. Your amazing! The world needs more shadows like you :)

[An owl on the moon]

You are too kind, dear friend! Though I always appreciate your kindness. Shadows only live because light lives near them. And I have a light in my life who so graciously lets me live. Wishing you such a happy weekend, for you and every soul you love. :)

[barleygirl]

This is a beautiful tapestry of flowing glowing artful sensations. Methinks one must be a painter of liquid paints in order to pen such an artful description of this life. I love your opening quote, so true, our writing becomes more compelling, the more courage we have to stand naked (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[An owl on the moon]

So thankful to see you by again, dear Margie. May you find courage always rising within you. :)

[Ayvid N]

The poem speaks to me of all the aspects of love, in all their splendor, crimson, red and gold. Even deception seems surreal at the hands of love. All that matters are the dreams and sighs. All that matters is to keep painting that canvas. Such breathtaking poetry Craig!

[An owl on the moon]

How I love your perceptions here, of the colors and cadence of love's divine existence. It is all around us, filling earth and sky, but few eyes ever fully learn to dwell in it. Hoping it fills your every breath, dear Divya.

[Ayvid N]

And I under this rain filled sky, close my eyes and take a deep breath, hoping to imbibe some of your poetic magic, for myself, my spiritual sustenance. It is a blessing to be in the company of such sheer poetic inspiration and brilliance! ⚘

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, it always rains joy when you visit. Whispering life and inspiration into every drop that covers you tonight. Blessings!

[Ayvid N]

I go to sleep a happier me and its you put that smile there. Blessings to you too dearest Craig. Goodnight ❤

[An owl on the moon]

Goodnight, dearest Divya. Very sweet dreams are waiting to make poetry of your thoughts. ❤

[emmajoy]

Ther's a gentle hush in this poem.. as if its' be read so often it's etched in a magical place.. sweet and silent. It's beautiful, Owl.. once of your very best. You've transcribed words into tableaus.. and allowed this reader to gaze for a second and sigh. Thank you

[An owl on the moon]

Always so thankful for your sighs here, and hoping each day you find a doorway to magical places. Maybe the enchantments of your poetry will come to life; there could be nothing more magical than that dear friend.

[ghostlyhearts]

You painted a beautiful canvas of words and images that leapt out as I read.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much for stopping here to read and encourage. :)

[Adam Adams]

Loved the rhythmic flow of yours that's well functioned ov'r the "tapestry" of your thoughts. Nice work!

[An owl on the moon]

Much appreciated, Adams! Hope all is well, my friend.

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Craig...so melodic and wistful even in the shadows and seemingly dark you paint the beauty of your poetic soul...and I stand in awe of your mastery. Stunning!

[An owl on the moon]

I so appreciate you, lynn. Learning to watch for stars in the darkness. And wishing you a wondrous weekend. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Paloma hit the nail on the head...you have a unique presentation in your wording, style...elegance of theme....and you speak of love similar to Poe's "to helen"----

[An owl on the moon]

It is always a joy to have you come by, jacob. Thank you for sharing your thoughts as we move into this new week of poetry.

[1VJ]

You have a very distinct style and elegant way of portraying your poetry. This is exquisite, I loved every word of it.

[An owl on the moon]

Paloma, I so deeply appreciate your kind, lifting thoughts. A blessed week to you. :)

[Latifa]

OH dear God, this is beautiful, the imagery, the vocab, just everything about it sway me into your fascinating imagination and creativity.

[An owl on the moon]

Dear Latifa, thank you so much for your constant encouragement. Only endless inspiration for you. :)

[wordman]

you painted it well,vivid colors jump off the canvas as you read

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your kind words of color shared here, wordman. :)