A siren in sea foam

Dulcet whispers across the sky

Tints of blue-kissed seas

These are fleeting memories

Reflections of her in my mind

Like an elixir of endless summer

Daydreams drifting overhead

A stormless presence she was

Fierce and free, like a phantasm

My labyrinth with a siren in sea foam

As she rose from the muted stone

Melted away the barren wasteland

Making spring rise in my deserts…

Reviews

[Marie]

Beautiful, as always. More than a nymph, more than a sprite..."a wiren in sea foam..."
Perfect phrasing.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, Marie. And yes... that she is. :)

[Latifa]

I love the imagery that the words draw into the reader's mind, Bravo :)

[An owl on the moon]

Latifa, oh what a joy to have you by! Thank you, dear friend... :)

[Pax]

You have always have this magical feeling and tale in every piece you penned my friend. The beauty, it shimmers... Now I believe that your writes are your lights, making our world not so crazy and messy.... we daydream because we can and it has a sense of freeing nature... Beautiful!!! its always great reading your verses, my friend....thanks for sharing....

[An owl on the moon]

My good friend, it's always such joy for me to have you here. Thank you! Sometimes it is hard for me, living on the dust... so I need my muse... who takes me to those deeper places where there is warmth and light... the places that make living so worthwhile... :)

[Bare trees]

The artistry and ingenuity here are amazing. The heart can be soothed by someone we love in ways we can't explain. Through your imagery and metaphors you've explained it in a poetic way that is impressive.

[An owl on the moon]

Yes, Palewriter... even in a dark distance, a beautiful soul can lift you... can strip away the pain... Thank you for stopping here.