Come and Weave a World With Me

We can make the world a better place…

Come and weave a world with me

Of golden threaded tapestries

And let us take the colder stone

Knit softer beds for those unknown…

 

The darkness ever intertwines

In lives of poor and kingly lines

Let us bind the bleeding scars

Unite the world under ashen stars…

 

Mend charred gates in meadows fair

Lace up boundaries that need repair

We will connect the seas and sands

Fuse our souls to the Everlands…

Reviews

[Ardra]

Wish life was as easy as poetry and people as easy to please isn't it....then there would be less damage in the world to heal.... easy to imagine life like this ...but quiet difficult in the real world...good one to read ... especially the last lines ...we will connect the sea and sands fuse our souls to the everlands....

[An owl on the moon]

It would be a more beautiful, loving world if words, sweet poetic words could be spoken and take root all around us. That would be a world of dreams. Maybe such a world exists, and if so, may you find it, precious poet.

[~]

I really enjoyed the looks of this world. A place of selfless love that is set out to touch as much brokenness and make it whole. A cry emerging from the best place of us - our everlasting soul.
Gorgons!! :D

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, I am so pleased that you could see it too through my frail words! Thank you so much! May you ever dance across such golden worlds and find your soul singing... :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I have to say, first off, I really love the format you used here. It sounds like an epic adventure in the making.

[An owl on the moon]

Smiling.. perhaps it will be.. I'm trusting that it's only just begun. Thank you, dear poet.

[Matching Socks]

What woman could request the invitation to join such a quest?
Wonderful poem C.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your tender words, Ana Sophia... May your weekend bring you endless light... :)

[Matching Socks]

Thank you and you're welcome!

[WhiteWillow]

The world is too full of negativity; its everywhere you turn these days, it seems. This is what we need more of...words of hope and love, in such a symphonic matter which speaks directly to the heart. Thank you for the golden ray of light that brightened my day.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words are so deeply appreciated... seems you carry golden rays of light wherever you go... :)

[Helena]

I like the images u create! World of words is wonderful! And u create beautiful scenes)))

[An owl on the moon]

And it is always a joy to share them with you, Helena... thank you! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

The romance in this write is overwhelming. The rhyming is flawless. Absolutely enchanting. Reads like the romantic period from 100 years ago....just so lovely! Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

You always encourage my heart so much, Lydia! Thank you!

[Melinda McQueen]

Each stanza has great imagery. A love poem in its own right.
A great poem.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so very much, Melinda! Appreciate you coming by... :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your verses give much to the reader to contemplate. I love your presentation, Craig...you must email me and tell me how you accomplished it!


My best,
Kelly

[An owl on the moon]

Hello, Kelly! So very glad you were by... And yes.. I'll send a message right away.. Happy weekend! :)

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of poetry, smooth flowing and masterful wording!
Loved it top to bottom, weaving a life of love together!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[An owl on the moon]

Always so encouraging, my friend! Blessings for your weekend! :)