The color of dreams

I fell with you this night

Into an abyss of fluid light

A dragon dressed in gold

With lady of dreams he would behold…

 

Making love in sea’s spice   

Voracious arousing paradise

Under the mystic moon

Falling deeper into soul’s cocoon…

 

Whispering wings closed tight

Sensuous shadows’ primal delight

Plunging fierce fleeting breath

Dangerous hunger, no fear of death…

 

Embraced in decadence

A dreamy, ethereal incense

Ravenous teeth and claws

Then a calm rising in flame’s pause…

 

Her heart became a fire

No more of flesh, only light’s desire

Wistful writhings in peace

Insatiable blaze of sweet release…

 

Transformed to the hauntings

Enfolded safe in the dragon’s wings

All melted into love

The color of dreams fathoms above…

 

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"The color of dreams" title seems to be belonged to "The colors of nights"... where she dances bare foot all ov'r the fathoms.. of dreams... love & haunting pleasure of inibituans. Nice imagery. Great job!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for sharing your insights, Adams! My poetry is mostly autobiographical... so glad you enjoy...

[Valentine]

Enfolded safe in the dragon's wings. Sound like a place for all lost souls to want to seek cover..Valentine

[An owl on the moon]

So appreciate your presence here, dear poet... and your uplifting words...

[willweb]

This was beautiful. I loved how this built into a final crescendo of the heat that was growing more intense with each line. Very cool.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for stopping here... for sharing your uplifting thoughts.. Hope your week is amazing..

[Jamestown]

What a well thought out and executed piece of work, free flowing and beautiful, thanks for sharing.

[An owl on the moon]

I greatly appreciate your encouragement.. thank you!

[Corset]

Very sexy and at the same time ethereal, tasteful, and flourishes with anticipation and wonder, if I wrote my dreams I'd be run out on a rail, lol, but I can always read about yours :)

[An owl on the moon]

Haha! Well... now I want to read your dream book! Thank you so much for always bringing your joy to my pages... :)

[Corset]

It's is yet to be written ;)

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You are ever flowing with beautiful creative imagery my dear poet. My stream comes and goes. Yours continuously carves canyons :)

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, lynn... how well I remember your wondrous rivers... and miss you here. Thank you for gracing my page with your presence.. :)

[SN]

I've missed reading your words. I've especially enjoyed discovering how, even though this starts as a physical description where you can almost imagine an embrace, the sea, the atmosphere, in its folds lies a great description of what happens on the emotional level. Quite the discovery, this one!

[An owl on the moon]

So grateful to have you by again... truly! It is a joy and pleasure to know your words are flowing like rivers now... and what value are words if not shared? So glad you could sense the emotions here.. from a dream released...

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You have created a sublime poem of love with a unique metaphor which I found utterly entrancing.

[An owl on the moon]

Very pleased you were by, dear friend... and entranced as well... And sometimes, metaphors come alive in magic... one never knows just when... :)

[Marie]

Beautiful...destiny with a dragon...

Sounds worth giving up life for...to melt in passion like that...

I just finished a chapter about a dragon in a book I'm writing. He plays chess.

[An owl on the moon]

Marie, so good to have you by! Always love your insights.. and very excited about your book.. sounds brilliant. :)