The Converging

Two

Lingering streams

Meandering untamed

Rambling

Roaming

Seeking shelter

Starlight reflected

In the crystal sighs

The pearl-white longings

Passages

Earthen led

Curved landscapes

Paths birthed

Universe breathed

As two streams

Rush savage

With ferocious fire

Fearless falling

Tumbling unrestrained

Converging

Separate streams

Melding

Melting

Merging

Into one vast

wild river

One… 

 

Author's Note

Water...

Reviews

[Ruth]

Beautiful! A union that holds infinite beauty and meaning, gorgeous! x

[An owl on the moon]

I deeply appreciate your words, Poppy! Yes.. water.. fire... now to earth and air...

[Kesha]

Oh wow Craig this is amazing. You truly are talented my dear friend. The imagery you paint with your words are simply beautiful. As always, wonderful write.

[An owl on the moon]

Kesha, thank you so much! I always appreciate your comments! A happy weekend to you... :)

[Kesha]

You are welcome, hope your weekend is filled with tons of joy!

[emmajoy]

Amongst the magic of your words is a truth so deep and powerful that it seems a long awaited dream is drifting into a union of 'everything' - at last. Reality, destiny wrapped in calm yet full of .. passion.

'Separate streams ~ Melding ~ Melting ~ Merging ~ Into one vast.. wild river ~ One… '

[An owl on the moon]

So deeply appreciate your words and thoughts... yes.. Wishing you a joyous destiny for your weekend, dear friend. :)

[lee von cleef]

saw a c-1 , at a pawn shop, a paddle in my mind, the boat of my teen dreams, but oh your picture takes the brave right out of me, age time will has done that, but to read the serpentine river you paint, words are smooth then I hear the rattler, I'll be old and dream away, good job, the world never ends,

[An owl on the moon]

I deeply appreciate your perspectives and your vivid thoughts, lee!

[Latifa]

this poem speaks loud to it's reader, and generates the attention from the first line to the last

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Latifa! :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice poem! To me, it was romantic- like rivers, lovers end up becoming one with each other as well.

[An owl on the moon]

Yes.. oh, it was muse and dream inspired... lives like rivers, flowing fierce together until just one remains.. deeper and stronger...

[Alfred Kukitz]

You are moving at the pace of the rivers which gives the rivers and poem a oneness. Nice work!

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate your comments so much, Alfred!

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting form. A nice piece.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for stopping by! :)