The Converging

Two

Lingering streams

Meandering untamed

Rambling

Roaming

Seeking shelter

Starlight reflected

In the crystal sighs

The pearl-white longings

Passages

Earthen led

Curved landscapes

Paths birthed

Universe breathed

As two streams

Rush savage

With ferocious fire

Fearless falling

Tumbling unrestrained

Converging

Separate streams

Melding

Melting

Merging

Into one vast

wild river

One… 

 

Author's Note

Water...

Reviews

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

wonderful work and very deep thought...loved it

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Shivalik.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

C. Froman,
I could see it! Descriptive expertise is so exciting to behold. Glad I got to find your poem today. We are the streams that seek other streams. Your poem was one of finding comparisons with others within this life! Your poem was very inspiring. Bless you Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your lifting words, Kathy! Blessings on your new year. :)

[Ardra]

Melding
Melting
Merging
Into one vast
wild river
One… ......
The wild river is sending quite warm thoughts all around..... sensual and beautiful..
There's nothing more beautiful than the union of two wild beings.....you describe the path way of two souls....lost yet finding way back home..... your words weave magic and tell stories.....the ones you hear when you let your imaginations run wild....thanks for always sharing your world...yours words...love every bit of it...

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your tender, beautiful kindness, dear poet. Sometimes we have to create worlds made of dream fabric to help us cope with the world we live in.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow!
I almost felt the humidity rising in the air, while reading this vivid piece of art!
It's like a breathe of fresh air.
Glad I stumbled upon it.
Way to go, Craig! :D

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, Jyoti, this is frail art compared to your dear presence here again! Thank you! May your new year fill you with endless blessings. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Best wishes for your year ahead as well.
:)

[Mark]

The slow thoughtful journey of solitude, meeting the rush and rapture of a like-minded emotion and how quickly that turns to the dizzyingly raw passion falling to romance, raging lust and the discovery of love… well that was how my emotions read it… thank you crag, again… your words and how they are placed with no more than three to a line… allowed me to fall without looking back and dive towards the last words outcome…
Thank you for sharing, i love this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Mark... this one has a special significance for me... a deep, moving river that still pulls me in the currents... May your new week bring you such wonders...

[little thoughts]

beautiful concept. well done

[alice]

Love this. It reminds me of Colorado's River delta.

[An owl on the moon]

I truly appreciate you coming by.. thank you.. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

I see the Monongahela meeting the Allegheny here.

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, yes.. Pennsylvania! Rivers are living waters... just as are souls...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Too true, I agree.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a sensuous metaphor! To think of desire and love in terms of streams flowing and then meeting is brilliant. I liked this a lot. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, Lydia! It was inspired from a vision... the streams are growing closer still... :)

[Ru Banerjee]

Such a supremely inspirational poem, Craig...I am totally soaked by, seeped into the depth of your words and touch the horizon of divinity with the magic of your imagination!

[An owl on the moon]

This was vision born... and I deeply appreciate your comments on my thoughts... It is so powerful when two souls converge into one...