Tequila Mockingbird Rainglow

Tequila Mockingbird Rainglow

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Slow pressed... sigh's blissed...

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Sunlife
sweat beads blister
crushed  ice  glinting
in rainglow
crisp  air  steams
highball  glass
low  ceilings
down  two  ounces
blue  agave  tequila
Aztec  dreams
Guadalajara  desert 
sweet  crème  de  menthe
corsican  colorless  white
sweet  flirtation
lime - scented  lips
slow  pressed 
sighing  blissed 
fingers  dripping
lingering  soft  soda
quiver  and  quake
slow  deliberate 
replay ecstasy 
swallow…

© 2013 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I have been instrumental in banning bottled water on the set. It hasn't gone that well with the crew... so I replaced it with tequila. - Hugh Laurie

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Great word play...it went down smoothly and tantalizingly...rather intoxicating!

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

So good to have you by, sweet poetess. :)
felioness

11 Years Ago

My pleasure!
wonderful sensual write. nicely penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

I truly appreciate your encouraging words. :)
teardrop

11 Years Ago

no problem
Very sensual. Loved the short lines, but are you really mixing tequila with creme de menthe? Really;) Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Ah, yes! Here is one official recipe... if you need a warm up in Canada. 1 1/2 oz tequila... 3/4 oz .. read more
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

What do you call it? Christmas Cacti has a nice ring.
Intoxicating write, a sensory journey.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Your words and presence are always welcome here!
This is like good perfume. Pretty intoxicating.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Words can move us in so many ways... thank you for sharing yours.
I love how you built a story without explicitly connecting these dots together...
...slow  pressed 
sighing  blissed 
fingers  dripping...
I find much to play with my imagination in your lines... Lee said it best, a sexy piece:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

It's always a joy to have you stop by! Thank you for sipping a bit on my words... :)
I like the quote and the poem. Beautiful photo gave life to your words. I like those places where the rum and tequila was cheap. Beautiful woman near. A nice journey with your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

I deeply appreciate you taking the journey with me, my friend. A good week to you now!
This poem made me drunk it is very intoxicating and on a day like today it Definitely shakes stirs and warns senses I enjoyed every line

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Thank you... Smiling... and wishing you a very intoxicating weekend, dear friend. Just what the chil.. read more
Chloe..Across the Universe

11 Years Ago

As always you're very welcome it is really a pleasure to read your writing you are a very good poet .. read more
find a root ? "Cho Cho pas te " the old men sip it fter it has been in the Tequila a while (a month or so) good for the belly and takes the bite out of the drink. your poem is sexy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

I truly appreciate your comments and insights... always, lee! Thank you for sharing, my friend.
I had a good swallow after reading this. A very musical sounding poem and a joy to read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

So glad you were by, and hope the drink went down nice and slow... :)

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