ISOLATION

Co-written with the amazing JiDonnelly!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How could something so magic
a feeling so immense
dramatically turn tragic
awkward and intense?

 

How the seasons turned so cold

a heartbreaking scene

unraveling to fool’s gold

solitary and unforeseen…

You never will fully realize
how much you inspired me
practically perfect in my eyes
all I ever desired to be…

 

Moving ahead in silence now

how fragments are all I see

a haunting empty vow

adrift on a frozen sea…

Author's Note

Please stop by Jidonnelly’s page here at the Cafe. What a wonderful poet! http://www.writerscafe.org/JiDonnelly

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautifully described. My same thoughts of a muse... how we long them to be perfect at times when we are not, yet, their imperfections are perfect in our eyes...an inspiring tale of human heart and mind. the muse can never always stay, but we continue to follow in our silence. Lovely!

[An owl on the moon]

What an honor to have you by, Kelsie! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and for always being so encouraging! :)

[MOON]

Great collaboration , you do romance and heartbreak with uh a delicate touch and your two voices flow as one. Lovely!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your wonderful kindness! And I miss JiDonnelly... hope that she'll be back . Have a beautiful new week. :)

[written in blood]

beautifully written, so majestic and somber.. very much enjoyed it!

[ErosNthanatos]

Alas...it never last doesn't it?

[AYVID]

Every writer pens a poem or two on heartbreak but you did it gently yet so very effectively. When love grows cold and we move away, this is just what we feel and wonder in retrospect. A soul stirring write.

I also love the picture (equally apt) and color-coordinated fonts.

[clairekeown25]

ahh so sad yet beautiful

[teardrop]

like this mainly the rhyme tho and the last paragraph, luv the different colors as well, stands out amazing!

[LynGeist]

A heartbreaking scene.... So solitary and unforseen.. I love that. I enjoy reading your work. Not overly complicated and confusing yet intriguing and makes one think. Great!

[A Teenage Girl]

Very beautiful. It has a sense of elegance, which is strange considering the message, but is rather intriguing.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Heartfelt and beautiful