We dance in ruby-rose rooms

MY LIFE IN FAIRYTALES...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A tapestry of tailors sit time-woven

In topaz tents under a tamarind tree

As our dreams of soft drifting daylight

Sway in diamond dewdrops of dawn

In an enchanted palace with my princess

While I uncover her devouring delight

Opal opulence alive on our orchid ottoman

All within her eyes are ocean-sweet orchards          

And we dance in ruby-rose rooms

Ever she my Eve in the entrance

To emotion’s Earth in ethereal evanescence

Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection

An aroma of lush apples from Wonderland

While ecstasy’s echoes enchant my

Evergreen reflections of her evening eyes

Magnolia castles of marble magnificence

Shelter us as we ride our misted memories and

Sail over sapphire sands on sage seahorses.

Author's Note

Words gathered like seashells from a dreamer’s diary…

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I feel like Alice!... this is a luscious dream filled with rich beauty, that you have masterfully penned! Your words take my imagination to a wonderful place of enchantment. Beautiful and Surreal work of art!

"Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection

An aroma of lush apples from Wonderland

While ecstasy’s echoes enchant my

Evergreen reflections of her evening eyes

Magnolia castles of marble magnificence" ~ Lovely write, dear poet!

[Sweets]

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL D=
very fairytale-ish :3
loved the whole scene :)
and your vocabulary is awesome too :)
Wonderful write!! THANK YOU !!! D=

[Bumble]

The way you gather words and just simply place them is amazing. You could gather words into your palms and blow them, like a child would with glitter, and the words would lay in perfect poems. Lovely job. :)

[Marie]

An abundance of amazine alliteration in this beautiful poem. To "sail over sapphire sands on sage seahorses" is as lovely an image as I ever read...