We dance in ruby-rose rooms

MY LIFE IN FAIRYTALES...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A tapestry of tailors sit time-woven

In topaz tents under a tamarind tree

As our dreams of soft drifting daylight

Sway in diamond dewdrops of dawn

In an enchanted palace with my princess

While I uncover her devouring delight

Opal opulence alive on our orchid ottoman

All within her eyes are ocean-sweet orchards          

And we dance in ruby-rose rooms

Ever she my Eve in the entrance

To emotion’s Earth in ethereal evanescence

Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection

An aroma of lush apples from Wonderland

While ecstasy’s echoes enchant my

Evergreen reflections of her evening eyes

Magnolia castles of marble magnificence

Shelter us as we ride our misted memories and

Sail over sapphire sands on sage seahorses.

Author's Note

Words gathered like seashells from a dreamer’s diary…

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I feel like Alice!... this is a luscious dream filled with rich beauty, that you have masterfully penned! Your words take my imagination to a wonderful place of enchantment. Beautiful and Surreal work of art!

"Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection

An aroma of lush apples from Wonderland

While ecstasy’s echoes enchant my

Evergreen reflections of her evening eyes

Magnolia castles of marble magnificence" ~ Lovely write, dear poet!

[Peanuts for Prose]

enchanting. Positive enchanting.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A visual for the senses. An amazing write. Very skilfully done. You weave your words with magic.

[Little Whisper]

I love this poem... this is one of my favorites! :)

[WhiteWillow]

A cleverly crafted clinic in alliteration. Entertaining as always

[MOON]

Great imagery and profound words . I simply love the romantic delicate touch And we dance in ruby-rose rooms
Ever she my Eve in the entrance
To emotion’s Earth in ethereal evanescence
Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection
Beautiful!

[Craba]

Ever she my Eve in the entrance
To emotion’s Earth in ethereal evanescence
Looking-glass adventures in her amethyst affection
An aroma of lush apples from Wonderland

Such prolific lines, and very vivid imagery. Strong write.

[Tina Kline]

Very vivid and lush in the imagery. It's like something one would dream about, romantic and full of wonderful visions of fantasy. You did a great job on weaving this together, you creative skills shine in this piece!

[emmajoy]

Woven streams of alliterative phrasing .. so lovely. I can imagine this post spoken against the sound of a stringed instrument, more harp than guitar .. and the sound of the sea swishing up and down over pebbles and shells on a shore. Truly lovely, 'All within her eyes are ocean-sweet orchards ~ And we dance in ruby-rose rooms'.

Wonderful picture, Craig.. yet another in your Alice series ..

[Eric Cox]

Very beautiful imagery. Cool creativity. Excellent poetic pen upon this!