Lingering on the edge

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lingering on the edge of light

on silver-shining sequined streets

footsteps fainting, falling night      

grafted gardens of colored pleats…

Rhythmic rifts of clouding skies

cadence tripping light the tune

lullen mists waltz olive eyes

I dance her earth and she my moon…

And in the tranquil ruby glimmer

rain descends in mothered pearls

she glides across the earthen shimmer

in seabird songs and lilting curls…

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Delightful imagery, Always enjoy your words, and thoughts! Very well done Craig!!

[Antonio Valentino]

wowwwie.. what a marvelous piece my friend.. the flow is simply superb and as always your words just tickle the senses as they saunter down the page..

always the consumate weaver of song and melder of specter and dream

well done Sir Craig!

:)

[Christina]

Your imagery in this poem is simply divine, Craig...well-done again, my friend :)

[John]

A ravishing faberge egg of a love poem where the rhyming vowel and consonant sounds parallel the harmony of your two lovers.

[Black Cat Fever]

This is one amazing...the images alone are very enchanting...love the poem!

[New Dawn]

loved this! Absolutely beautiful - particularly liked .' rain descends in mothered pearls' what imagery ! You have surpassed yourself :)

[Hanhil]

I totally, deeply love this poem! This is so sigh-worthy and beautiful! I am in love :-)

[Patrick]

a collection of near flawless phrases...but i have come to expect this from you

[mandy]

lovely words....rain descends in mothered pearls,,,very descriptive,,,,nice work

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem, poetic words of beauty sweep throughout, excellent work!