In Your Extravagance

In Your Extravagance

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Every whispered strain of you…

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Secrets only you can give

where dreams and dragons fiercely live…

  

Every whispered strain of you

is extravagance in their brilliant hues…

 

Invite us in to take a seat

to taste your bitter and your sweet…

 

For you are unquenchable fires

yielding yourself in ravenous desires…

 

Gilded treasures held within

now locked away in your softing skin…

 

My fingers caress your key

please yield your sweet world to me…

© 2012 An owl on the moon


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Craig, your poetry is always a joy to read.........this is no exception.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You bring forth whimsical words of loving encouragement to reveal treasures within ... writers gravitate toward you poetic verse. You have a style that evokes mystical visions...and I, for one of many, have become enchanted. Excellent write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Enticingly lovely. I love your use of word play, and the simplistic melody that follows.
As always, wonderful. Keep it up .^^

~Vin

Posted 12 Years Ago


Man, Alice surely inspired you here. I love this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice meter here and beautiful praise for the extraordinary. 'Every whispered strain of you' is perfection in verse. You give the reader such a mystical and lovely feel for the subject, as if we were in her presence as you delivered this. Wonderful work Sir Craig!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Keep sending her poems like this, and her whole world will yield around you,

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
every line drips with sweet romance. very inspiring and engaging read. enjoyed it very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a dulce song of the perfect lover.
Your words are little snowflakes on her skin
They dance, I've seen them doing,

Perfection in surrealism.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Grand tea party, very seductive write, lovely I really like these lines Every whispered strain of you
is extravagance in their brilliant hues…


Posted 12 Years Ago


Eagerly, my friend....With all the Love!
You are such a talented poet and we are all blessed to read your words that uplift and inspire the deeper parts of passion!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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An owl on the moon

12 Years Ago

You are an inspiration! How I feel your wondrous life is just reaching the second stanza... Can't wa.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

12 Years Ago

You inspire me as well. You manage today to bring me back to myself as I hold on to strength today. .. read more

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