In Your Extravagance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secrets only you can give

where dreams and dragons fiercely live…

  

Every whispered strain of you

is extravagance in their brilliant hues…

 

Invite us in to take a seat

to taste your bitter and your sweet…

 

For you are unquenchable fires

yielding yourself in ravenous desires…

 

Gilded treasures held within

now locked away in your softing skin…

 

My fingers caress your key

please yield your sweet world to me…

Reviews

[rnuff]

Such a sweet magniff write, that is sincere and beautiful.

[Star Wolf]

A mystery for the taking if one can just find the way. A beautiful and vivid poem. Awesome, really.

[Abd-afeez]

wow! I love this poem, every of the lines are nothing but powerful. Especially as the every line i read stocked vivid onto my mind. I love the introductory line most, it made me picture the fancy world in our dreams. How it immerse our emotions with existence and the ensuing charade is just what we never want to end. This poem is short but powerful, thank you for letting us cup out a quenching taste out of your bardy stream.

[Brianna Brie]

This is crafted so wonderfully. "Gilded treasures held within now locked away in your softing skin…" This is my favorite line! You know that feeling when you are reading something and there is a defined moment. For me, one line clicks recognition inside of me.

[The Refined Poet]

this poem demonstrates your skill in poetry. nicely executed, the imagery and word choice is perfect. the last stanza concludes it oh so well, that is my favorite line.

[Valentine]

A sweet write..too bad that in rael life we have to eat a pound or sugar with a pound of salt..God bless..Kathie

[Tina Kline]

A very beautiful and skillfully written poem. Such lovely imagery in this, it brings out the uniqueness of this poem.

[Kristallo]

Craig, this is stunningly gorgeous. "Gilded treasures held within... now locked away in your softing skin." That's so marvelously romantic, it makes me pine for a thing I have never known. You evoke the spirit of love and belonging with such fantastically decadent imagery that it leaves the reader completely in awe of you. Of your words. .. I loved this, each couplet was pristine and so blissful, airy and elegant. Such a beautiful soul and imagination you possess... brilliant poetry.

Krys

[Eric Cox]

Powerful, beautiful imagery. Finely penned. A cool write. Excellent work.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Each word magically woven, excellent read and write.