In Your Extravagance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secrets only you can give

where dreams and dragons fiercely live…

  

Every whispered strain of you

is extravagance in their brilliant hues…

 

Invite us in to take a seat

to taste your bitter and your sweet…

 

For you are unquenchable fires

yielding yourself in ravenous desires…

 

Gilded treasures held within

now locked away in your softing skin…

 

My fingers caress your key

please yield your sweet world to me…

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a really passionately romantic write.
nice pace gives the sound a soulful strut.

jacob

[An owl on the moon]

jacob, what a wonderful thing to have you by! Thank you for your always encouraging voice. :)

[Sorry Infamous]

"Every whispered strain of you" Craig, I wish I had wrote this line! It is a whole poem in itself. The whole thing was a craft of wonder but I kept going back to this line. It's just that good! One of those little gems.

[An owl on the moon]

Your delight delights me, sweet friend! Thank you so much.. Have a beautiful weekend in every way. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I can't help but fall in love with this extravagance!... you have enveloped me within this smoldering invitation of mystical enchantments. Alluring write!... I enjoyed reading this again, and again...

[An owl on the moon]

Always so sweet to have you by, Robbie! Will try and keep you enveloped and smoldering with enchantments... ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's always a pleasure to delve into your poetic Wonderland...the best place to be in the world! ;))

[KeeD]

I feel like i'm at "the tea party" and the hatter is luring me into these carnal desires, to reveal my inner most deepest darkest secrets and spill my plate with imagination. Great Write, amazing,amazing,amazing! loved it.

[Samuel Dickens]

I want to join in that tea party, as long as I get to keep my head.

[Bette]

Very inviting, tasteful and beautiful well done Craig.

[Pratik]

This is so brilliant... A wish to delve deep into the secrets of a beloved who holds them close to her heart... Desire to demystify the unknown.. Your poem instills a life in that wish that reverberates in your readers' heart... Loved it :)

[no sun]

Well Mr Romantic this will do nothing to tarnish your reputation. I enjoy your writes, they are easy to breathe in.

[i-human]

Alluring