Empty Soul
A Poem by AaronFreitas
Originally a song I wrote way back Feb 10, 2008, changed a couple things so I could share. It was written about a specific moment in my life where things weren't good.
Nothing's ever perfect
Nothing's ever fair
I look into these eyes
And see this blank stare
Frayed since my creation
Abandoned from the start
My mother never loved my dad
And it breaks my f*****g heart!
Made to disappoint
Destined to fail
Created for your laughter
Only I could never tell
I am so pathetic
It’s so sad to see
I am just a worthless liar
but that’s what you made of me
That’s why you did it
That’s why you left me empty
Torn between my family
And it’s not sad for you to see
Why me? Why me?
What did I do to deserve this empty destiny?
Why me? Why me?
Take my empty soul and leave me free to be
You gave me life
But left me in this empty hole
So take my life
And my empty soul
© 2016 AaronFreitas
Author's Note
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Wow....I'd share a song to answer this, but it's not on English, and i couldn't translate yet. . so ....
i can relate to this, all too well. (except for being a liar.)
but, take a quick note, we're all here for you :)
you're not worthless.
:)
you're one of a kind. no one could even think about asking for a better friend :)
i loved the write
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Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
www.writerscafe.org/writing/Danny15/1700613/ play tha song while reading :)
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8 Years Ago
And you're welcome.
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8 Years Ago
Awesome song to read to by the way! Almost couldn't even read your review I have my guitar on my co.. read moreAwesome song to read to by the way! Almost couldn't even read your review I have my guitar on my couch next to me I wanted to start playing haha... I appreciate your feedback buddy :)
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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you :) I'm glad you can relate and understand where I was coming from :)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Ana... I'm glad you stopped by too :) I hope all is well for you :) Happy 2016... hope t.. read moreThank you Ana... I'm glad you stopped by too :) I hope all is well for you :) Happy 2016... hope this year is good to you.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Thanks E.G. :) Darkness comes and goes... wish it would stay away :)
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Emily :)
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8 Years Ago
That third stanza is a tough one for me... that's the way I felt for a long time. Sometimes it stil.. read moreThat third stanza is a tough one for me... that's the way I felt for a long time. Sometimes it still feels that way. In the end we make it through those tough times :) Thanks for your review :)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
I'm glad these words reached you... sometimes we hit spots during life that are hard to get through .. read moreI'm glad these words reached you... sometimes we hit spots during life that are hard to get through and it just feels like the world is crashing down on us. It may take a while, take a lot of work but you will get past these hard times my friend. Stay strong. Thanks for your review :)
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8 Years Ago
Thanks for the advice :D
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Yes indeed my friend. Thanks for your review I appreciate it :)
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for your awesome review Bushra :) I really appreciate it buddy :)
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8 Years Ago
haha why rage micky? It is i little intense my friend... you know I always appreciate your time my .. read morehaha why rage micky? It is i little intense my friend... you know I always appreciate your time my friend :) Hope all is well with you :)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
They definitely do... and for some it works out. My parents were never together which wasn't the ha.. read moreThey definitely do... and for some it works out. My parents were never together which wasn't the hard part. The hard part was the fighting back and forth and the stress it put on me to basically pretend to not be happy at each parents so I didn't hurt or anger the other. Thanks for your review :)
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Added on December 30, 2015
Last Updated on February 2, 2016
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I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..
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