Apocalypse

Just something totally off the wall for a contest... no offense to anyone just found a cool pic and came up with the idea.

God said, “Please set fire…

To each living soul that’s sinned.”

He watched as we burned

Reviews

[ANTO]

Revelations 'number of the beast' often stirs my thoughts - perhaps it just a way of describing sinners who havent repented or have no intention of doing so. In which case this is totally step two.
Great bit of fantasy inspired by a very intriguing image. Nice exercise A.
Good luck in the contest :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you ANTO... it was fun and a different perspective on the belief our savior will return to Earth to restore the way life should be. What if the sinners and those that didn't repent just burned away. All the weird stuff that runs through my head when seeing a cool picture haha... appreciate your review :)

[Willard Wells]

We are all sinners and watching us burn now in our stupid earthly lives as we wait for our time here to burn out and end so we can move to a better table with the master at the head. Well done loyal servant.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Willard :) You are absolutely right my friend :)

[MissLaine]

WAH we will all burn!!! :( lol

I loved it though. Nice imagery. :) :D

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you MissLaine :) haha it was something a little different but fun to do :)

[MissLaine]

:) no problem. mmhmm :D

[Tomoe Tellez]

Well, I have read many times that we will all burn, whether you're going to hell or heaven, because there's a part in the bible that says that we have to be burned to be pure again. The last line of the poem captures the image completely in its own. Great job and choice of words!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Alondra :) It was something a little different but it's kind of a unique way to look at things :) Glad you liked it

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like the poem, I want to be there watching when Father God burns the laughing demons

[AaronFreitas]

:) That does sound like fun doesn't it ;) Appreciate your comment my friend :) It's been a long time since I've seen you on here hope all is well :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

The world will turn to ashes then. We all are sinners.
Profound piece!
Astounding imagery!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Jyoti :) It's tough writing in that format but the picture in my head was clear. Then I ended up finding the picture which helped me finish my thoughts. I am glad you like :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Cool!
You are very welcome. :)

[SCRIBBLER]

What a deep meaning in something only a few words long. Such deep thinking can only be urs.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Scribbler :) I wanted to do something a little different so it means a lot you got it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

XD where's the fire extinguisher???!!!!!! Lol.
nice little poem. xD world burns... would spare the bills for the winter. lmao. :D just kiddin.

[AaronFreitas]

haha thanks for your comments... I had fun with it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome :)