Apocalypse

Just something totally off the wall for a contest... no offense to anyone just found a cool pic and came up with the idea.

God said, “Please set fire…

To each living soul that’s sinned.”

He watched as we burned

Reviews

[ANTO]

Revelations 'number of the beast' often stirs my thoughts - perhaps it just a way of describing sinners who havent repented or have no intention of doing so. In which case this is totally step two.
Great bit of fantasy inspired by a very intriguing image. Nice exercise A.
Good luck in the contest :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you ANTO... it was fun and a different perspective on the belief our savior will return to Earth to restore the way life should be. What if the sinners and those that didn't repent just burned away. All the weird stuff that runs through my head when seeing a cool picture haha... appreciate your review :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That's like a nice slap in the face. Very effective!

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words my friend. Few people are walking the right path. Thank you Aaron for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Johnson Bobby]

the spiritual strength of gods power some times is not apreciated

[Riddhi]

Hey ! It was really a nice piece of writing...I do agree with you that he who have created us has the divine power to finish our lives...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you riddhi... this one was a little different but I'm glad you liked it.

[Terpsichore]

He created and set us up in a way that we could be knocked down, out of a job otherwise.

I'm a believer though. There just has to be a higher hand at work because warts and all, it all works too well to be just co-incidence.

T

[AaronFreitas]

I agree completely... there has to be and I am a believe :) Thanks for your feedback :)

[wordman]

this is an eye opener my friend

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you :) I actually won an award for it :)

[wordman]

well i can see why !

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I'm sorry Aaron, I'm not religious, so I don't have a comment for this

[AaronFreitas]

It's all good... still the thought of you commenting and reading makes me appreciate you :)

[patricia]

not offensive at all. There is no one who hasn't sinned and for me the fire was of his burning love.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Patricia :) I am glad you found the intended meaning in the words :) Appreciate your comments :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Any time in life, anyone is able to sin. Be it they are religious or not. Some deserve to burn for their sins, while many don't deserve that...the picture helps envision this piece more. Great write!

[AaronFreitas]

The picture is what really puts it all into perspective... appreciate your review :) I haven't seen you in so long! It's nice to see you on here :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I know, I miss being on here and reviewing everyone's stuff! I've just been so busy with work lately and writing new poetry. It's like I never get any free time to just be on here anymore.

[AaronFreitas]

Understandable my friend :)

[several thousand]

Reckon he'd say "Please"....?

[AaronFreitas]

He just might :) haha