Rescue my Soul (Senryu)

Rescue my Soul (Senryu)

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Just some thoughts

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God, can you hear me?

It’s Aaron… I need your help.

Please rescue my soul.

 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


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AaronFreitas
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I hear this, when i close my eyes and listen i can hear a small and scared and feeble voice, tattered and worn just pleading, almost begging for some mercy.
It makes your heart sink.
It also reminds me of a child, unaware and untainted having their first lesson in life but that somehow is a darker picture than the first.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

I mentioned in a comment this write took me back to my childhood... laying in bed praying and gettin.. read more



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Simple words, and a truly meaningful poem . Leaves everyone wondering a bit ....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thanks my friend :) I am glad it leaves everyone wondering a bit :)
Straightforward, to the point. Flawless. I used to pray this same thing all the time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thanks J.A. appreciate your review :)
Great poem! Love the length and simplicity of it. Those few words leave it open for the imagination. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Juliza :) Appreciate the review my friend
Very good Aaron they go well together

Bill

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Bill :)
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

your welcome
So simple but so powerful.. amazing
Great job:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Tee :) Appreciate your review
I hear this, when i close my eyes and listen i can hear a small and scared and feeble voice, tattered and worn just pleading, almost begging for some mercy.
It makes your heart sink.
It also reminds me of a child, unaware and untainted having their first lesson in life but that somehow is a darker picture than the first.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

I mentioned in a comment this write took me back to my childhood... laying in bed praying and gettin.. read more
a perfect Senryu .. Such simple words and a powerful impact.. I believe that God will listen to you and rescue your soul :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Nazia! I appreciate your review :)
all u have do is pray and he will answer

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yes maam :) Thank you!
yvo miki

9 Years Ago

Ur welcome
Plea,inside prayer and faith...
Beautiful expression! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jeyanthi :) Appreciate your kind words my friend :)
Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome, Sir ... :)
I like the haikus. They are like little puzzle to write. Keep them coming.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thanks buddy... appreciate your kind words!

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Added on May 4, 2015
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Tags: senryu, faith, soul

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