Hmmm... As for the poem, i think its very well done. As for the meaning...now i'm speaking, based on personal experience... Well, i'd only write poems like this, if my relationship with someone i love would break. When someone i love...or to pick up the poem's atmosphere a little better, someone i used to love shatters my heart. Anyhow, you did great.
Great piece of writing that I can relate to no doubt:( awesome flow, great
wording and unfortunately sad but true message! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you James I appreciate your comments. Sometimes it just works out that way my friend. My fut.. read moreThank you James I appreciate your comments. Sometimes it just works out that way my friend. My future is bright though lots to be happy about :)
I really liked this one. The last four lines took my breath away. The memories of what once was are always the hardest to overcome. Great job!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you my friend... they are the hardest to over come... especially 10 years of those feelings. .. read moreThank you my friend... they are the hardest to over come... especially 10 years of those feelings. Thanks for your review :)
"You failed to see
The good in me
And now you’re just
A memory"
You are so right. A lot of things go unnoticed or ignored in a relationship. A splendid poem...:)................
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much Sami... a lot of things do go unnoticed and if it goes on too long it can be the.. read moreThank you very much Sami... a lot of things do go unnoticed and if it goes on too long it can be the end of it all. Appreciate your review my friend :)
Thank you Perkele.... I definitely did... the truth sets us free :)
9 Years Ago
I read it again today for kicks and giggles. Lies are just a bad omen for any relationship~ or even .. read moreI read it again today for kicks and giggles. Lies are just a bad omen for any relationship~ or even a friendship!
Almost out of breath from reading it fast :) kidding :)
A great flow, your sadness resurfaces again, and fills the pages. your pen writes of what the heart hurts the most.
blessings to you my friend!!
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9 Years Ago
Thanks moonskittles... sometimes it hurts sometimes it's fine. Just depends on the day I guess :)
its really interesting to think of the story behind this, its a good piece :)
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Thank you my friend.... I could write a novel on the story behind this haha... thanks for you review.. read moreThank you my friend.... I could write a novel on the story behind this haha... thanks for you review I appreciate it :)
manipulation seems to be taught in our colleges today,get what you want,get what you need
then cut and watch them bleed,or maybe there conscious bothered them so they came clean
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Very true my friend... as a society we reward those that manipulate and use others. Thanks for your.. read moreVery true my friend... as a society we reward those that manipulate and use others. Thanks for your comments wordman you are much appreciated my friend :)
Oh my Lord is this a powerful testament of my previous relationship.She had used my lust to manipulate and control me for 7 years.I thought I loved her actually I did but though I thought it but my Ex girl's sister told me that she told her I was only around for the financial assistance.Every time she would leave I found myself taking her back in again until one day I said no to the sex she'd wanted and I was finally set free from her hold on me.not long afterwards God brought my wife into my life and now I am happy
Bill
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9 Years Ago
I went through something similar my friend... someday I will find that someone that makes me happy :.. read moreI went through something similar my friend... someday I will find that someone that makes me happy :)Thank you for the review :)
9 Years Ago
Oh by the way title it Love is blind and your welcome
Hmmm... As for the poem, i think its very well done. As for the meaning...now i'm speaking, based on personal experience... Well, i'd only write poems like this, if my relationship with someone i love would break. When someone i love...or to pick up the poem's atmosphere a little better, someone i used to love shatters my heart. Anyhow, you did great.
I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..