Hmmm... As for the poem, i think its very well done. As for the meaning...now i'm speaking, based on personal experience... Well, i'd only write poems like this, if my relationship with someone i love would break. When someone i love...or to pick up the poem's atmosphere a little better, someone i used to love shatters my heart. Anyhow, you did great.
While reading this poem, I felt the pain and suffering of betrayal. Your word choice is simple, yet revealing. The flow throughout the work enhances the imagery within the poem.
Excellent work!
-Yanina
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much Yanina :) I appreciate your review.... I am glad you liked it
One of the things I like about your writing is how honest it is. It's straight up and from the heart. The truth can be very hurtful and painful but I've always found it easier to deal with than the lies and why they think lies are necessary. All they do is shatter trust.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Jan I appreciate that.... it's almost always straight up and from the heart my friend :)
Wow Aaron!
I loved the flow and the meaning.
And people who can't see the good in you should best remain a memory.
They probably didn't deserve you in the first place.
You owned it bud! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Yes indeed Ishita.... just a memory for those :) Thanks I appreciate your review!
Excellent poem Aaron! What I really enjoy about reading your writing is you have a variety of topics, and your poems, and personal stories put together would make an interesting read, and great book :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Aww thanks my friend! I really want to do a poetry book! It would be something to be proud of even.. read moreAww thanks my friend! I really want to do a poetry book! It would be something to be proud of even if it sells 3 copies lol. I appreciate your review Madison :)
I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..