Nightmare

Written for RiverRei's nightmare contest :)

She said she loved me…                                    

So why am I tied naked to this bed?

A gag in my mouth keeping me quiet,

Handcuffs are holding me in place.

The room is dark,

Lit by just a black light.

My heart's beating rapidly…

I’m anxious for what’s to come.

She struts through the doorway,

Damn she is so sexy!

This must be some kind of sex game…

Oh count me in!

Then I see a shiny dagger in her hand,

She drags it slowly across her tongue…

Her sexy voice whispers in my ear,

“Tell me you want it Papi!”

Slowly, she zigzags the knife down my chest,

Calmly, romantically kissing on my neck….

Then just like that…

A slit across my chest!

I scream in pain but my cries are silent to her,

She speaks no words, just stares with an evil smirk…

She cuts me again, and again just to see me bleed…

The blood drips from her lips…

She chuckles, then with her hands,

Takes hold of my manhood….

She grabs the dagger as I scream and plead!!!

I’m desperate for air… I roll over…

Grabbing my pillow desperately,

Covered in sweat and barely breathing…

Damn these evil nightmares….

Hard to decipher evil from reality.

 

Reviews

[KWP]

Yowwwsssssaaaaa well thats not the kind of dream any man would want eh?

that moment - that few milliseconds - that snatch of breath when we just can't remember what reality we have chosen to reside - yeah I want to find that gap right there and explore between the dreams ...

your painted imagery was right on pace here my friend - well done (nice pic too) XX

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much KWP. I mentioned this before... if I had this dream I would just bathe in holy water for a week! lol thanks for the review :)

[micky]

Ha i love this one Aaron its my new fav....i love the darkness,it starts out kinkie and then pure evil....pure talent my friend well done!!!:)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Micky... this is a look into my mind... this one was a creative write rather than something close and personal :) Thank you my friend for the review... I appreciate you :)

[andrew mitchell]

How many lives do you have Aaron? again you have survived and all in tact with this horror spooky nerve tingling tail. Love it. AM

[AaronFreitas]

haha actually this one is made up... if I had experienced this I'd be bathing in holy water tonight! I got the idea from a nightmare contest so thought I'd get creative and write something. Thanks for your review my friend :)

[andrew mitchell]

I reckon some cat is missing nine lives and you found them lol :)

[AaronFreitas]

Haha good one

[Ana B.]

Very vivid descripiton. the closing stanza, well you nailed it there my friend. Wonderful job Aaron, contest or no contest :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Ana... it was nice to have a topic to write about and just get creative... write whatever came to mind... then the picture fit perfect! Thanks for your kind words :)

[Ana B.]

Anytime my friend!

[sereenaoutloud]

wow...actually speechless my friend...this was Mrs grey gone evil lol!
Great write and very creative and the photo is perfect for this piece! It is written so well that even i cringed on behalf of all you boys lol

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you my friend! I had a lot of fun with this one :)

[sinNsincerity]

Dam She's Sexy! hahah This was killer and i really digg it!
Awesome write brother!

[AaronFreitas]

haha I think it is Lindsey Lohan... not sure but yeah... I think it's half fantasy half nightmare cause I wouldn't mind her coming into my room! haha thanks... I appreciate the review :)

[sinNsincerity]

Oh yea she's a babe! Let me know when you find out! hahaha

[....................]

I used to have nightmares, but nothing like this. This was so intense I cringed in a few places, especially the manhood part. A great imagination there friend and a nice photo accompaniment.

[AaronFreitas]

The photo is awesome... it may be Lindsey Lohan in this scary movie she did... the picture online didn't have info on it. Thanks for the review my friend... the manhood part... definitely a nightmare.

[ANTO]

Ohh - this was way too good in the imagery department - i and most guys who read this probably felt this in more ways than one. I literally involuntarily clamped my knees together.
I think this will appeal to some as an 'Oh if only...' fantasy - (you know who you are out there lol)

Just one question Aaron - my friend - What or who is 'Papi' ?

I truly cringed when I read she dragged the blade across her tongue - *shivers*
Cool write mate. Great idea RR.
:)

[AaronFreitas]

haha thanks... in this made up nightmare I was Papi and I was picturing some sexy Latina... ok so maybe it was half fantasy half nightmare! haha thanks for the review my friend :)

[ANTO]

That I kinda gathered and was teasing you my friend, lol. You are a good sport. The personal touches are what made this believable - you injected your Self into it and thats how it succeeded. Your poetry and story-telling skills are really getting honed.
Bravo Aaron, Bravo!
:)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you ANTO... I guess my mind is a little on the crazy side haha

[Jamestown]

I thank the Lord I haven't had one like this!
I've had some crazy dreams, but your sicko mind
trumps mine, lol! Nice piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

haha this one wasn't a real nightmare... just for a contest. If I had this one I'd definitely be soaking in holy water! Thanks for the review my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I like those dangerous woman and places.
"Damn these evil nightmares….
Hard to decipher evil from reality."
Nightmares can become reality if we are not careful. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry. I did like the photo also.
Coyote

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you my friend! I was trying to get creative... this one wasn't a real nightmare... but something that would definitely scare me if it was :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too and you are welcome.