Proof of Faith

Proof of Faith

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Today me and my daughters narrowly avoided a 6 car pileup in the rain... it was as if time stopped so we could be spared.

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When I prayed last night, I asked you to keep us safe;
Protect my family, especially, my beautiful daughters.
Today, you reached down and kept us out of harm's way;
Kept us alive by missing that accident-- proof of Faith.

I thank you, and my daughters thank you.
I made sure they understood exactly who protected us.
I asked them each to pray and thank you personally
As we drove away from the pileup, shaken emotionally.

Faith is confidence in what we hope for;
Faith is belief in what we do not see.
You proved that today, Lord, by saving my family, so
I'll take this opportunity to share my faith through poetry. 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


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I take it this is autobiographical too. Thank God you all got away untouched. I guess prayers are never prayed in vain. Br safe all of you. This is really an emotional piece. An eye-opener too, that God really exists.


Small correction- Second stanza, is there an apostrophe required,shouldn't it be "Daughters"? And in the second last line of the last stanza, a comma after "Lord" would make it more effective.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yeah I didn't think there should be an apostrophe but Word insisted on changing it so I left it :) .. read more



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Faith indeed truly saves us and God bless your family are safe.
Beautiful write Aaron.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thanks buddy :) Happy to be able to write about it and spread the Faith :)
Definitely God is with you aaron, and it's all your faith, beliefs, and prayers which protected you and your lovely daughter from that accident.
Certainly God is always with us just need to feel his presence, devote ourselves to his morals and which will make us a good person in his eyes.
God gives us the strength to accomplish the right goals and protect from harms.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Armin... I believe He was there to the fullest :) thanks for the review my frien.. read more
he does things for us daily ,all we need to do is just look.
he delivered me from cigarettes ,smoking 4 packs a day , he has saved my life for sure when I drank to much and was going after more but my truck wouldn`t crank , next morning it cranked right up.
angel sit in my bedroom for a week or so to protect me from a demon,had 3 heart attacks none has killed me

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

He is definitely with you brother! He is amazing and works in amazing ways :)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

that was just half of it brother he has marked my forhead,he has spoken 3 times
I had a visi.. read more
Praise Jesus! That is the power of prayer!PTL
Thanks for sharing and so thankful you and yours are okay!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend! I am waiting for the news to see if anyone passed... it was pretty bad! We we.. read more
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jesus:)

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