Was it a dream?

A dream/nightmare I had the other night.... decided to write about it.

I reach for help, no one is there

I try to breathe, gasping for air

Suffocate me, can’t take my soul

Desecrate me, a spirits toll

Try to escape, but I just fall

To my scarred knees, I plod and crawl

Still cannot breathe, frantic for air

Can’t pull away, Lord hear my prayer

Hands cover mouth, death seems so near

Open my eyes, grab rest my fears

For I am awake, twas just a dream

Demons can’t take, my soul from me

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cherub]

Loved this. My favourite lines were "Hands cover mouth, death seems so near
Open my eyes, grab rest my fears
For I am awake, twas just a dream"
Personally, i think this imagery was fantastic. You really made me and almost feel what was happening. Very fluid with movement and keeps a nice pace. :^) Thanks for the great read, Aaron!

[AaronFreitas]

haha no lie when I read your favorite lines I was like did I write that or did she add that lol... it's been a while since I've read this and it was nice to go back to the mind set I was in. It's been forever since I've written so thanks for your review my friend :)

[J.R.H.]

Wow! Effing amazing man. Thanks for the read. It was well written and very intense. It was good from beginning to end. Nothing to critique here.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much... your words mean a lot! Thank you my friend and glad you liked it.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic piece of work again!
Great flow and definitely intense, I was breathing
hard, so I know you were. Keep up the great work!
Happy Easter! PTL. ..

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much James! Been so busy lately moving to my new house... no internet here yet and having my girls a lot! It was nice to finally sit down and get to write... thank you my friend!