A letter to Mom and Dad

A letter to Mom and Dad

A Story by AaronFreitas
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I nearly died 10 years ago, it was the first time I had my mom and dad by my side. I decided to write about it.

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I saw you mom, sitting by my side holding my hand.  Praying to God that he doesn’t take me away from you yet.  You gave away two full years of life with me, could this really be the death of your only son?

 

I saw you dad, waiting patiently to see if I’d awaken.  Shirt soaked in tears begging God not to steal his only child. Life is too short to lose and live without your son.  You have finally felt the love in return after not having me for many years. 


I see you mom and dad.  I watch from above while both of you sit by my bedside praying silently that this is not the end.  Holding my hands, praying that the mistake from twenty years ago doesn’t escape this world without understanding that you both love me.  

 

Twenty years of life and today I almost died.  They said there was no way I’d make it out alive but the power of prayer proved otherwise. I opened my eyes and saw my parents by my side.  I actually thought I died, gone to heaven and life on Earth no longer existed. 

 

It was just a miracle that brought my parents to my side together for the first time.  They thought I’d die; they weren’t even there together to welcome me in to life yet today they are by my side.  

 

With all that said, I love you mom and dad.  No one is perfect and I can’t blame you for your faults.  We only live in this world once and we only learn as we live and make mistakes.  I am thankful for everything and for the both of you.  Thankful for your imperfections and thankful that you have let me make my own mistakes.  Thank you mom and dad. 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


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AaronFreitas
I was bored and wanted to write... I remembered this day... let me know your thoughts :)

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This is actually autobiographical??? In the postscript you have mentioned ever so casually that you remembered this day.
An intense piece. What I love about it is you haven't done much to make it sound intense, yet your selection of words and ambiance in the story do the job for you wonderfully. Bravo Aaron

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Annie... and yes it is autobiographical. It was back when I was 20 and I wrote it the way.. read more



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No matter the people, the love of parents for their children is a strong bond that keeps us grounded.

I am soo happy my friend that you are alive and well.

All the best for you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Miss Skittles :) I am also happy I am alive haha
wow. That was really good... See writers like you are what inspires young people to write.. Keep up the good work Aaron. I will keep reading your work & leaving a review... But if you write like that when you get bored you need to get bored more often.lol. Goodluck with all your work!♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Tessa :)
Tessa Danielle Guise

9 Years Ago

No problem at all really... Your work is amazing... Please keep up the good work.... I would LOVE to.. read more
"i was bored and wanted to write.." was your authors note...well i hope you get bored again my friend. This was a great personal write! thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

haha thanks my friend :) Sometimes thats how it works for me
Fascinating one! Parents are the visible gods on earth, two beings that stay with us even at our darkest times in life, not expecting anything in return. You've dedicated a wonderful piece to them (y)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Deepika :) It's funny how sometimes pieces come together... I wrote some things.. read more
Wow Aaron, thank you for sharing a very sacred and secret part of yourself. I did not know you nearly died a decade ago. I am so very sorry about that, but thank Heavens and God for not giving you up yet. Because it is not your time. And I am so happy you are still here alive, sharing parts of you that are so raw, sincere, exquisite. And you are a wonderful person as well.

Unfortunately, we do not choose our parents. So they can come as loving or not so much; it's like winning a lottery ticket. You never know what you can get. But in these words, I felt that they love you very much and so much that they were able to be in the same room together with you. Those important moments do show true love responding. And little moments do count, but the big moments make their mark much more significantly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Indeed Nadia! I have been lucky to have parents that care even though they can't be in the same roo.. read more
This is such a beautiful writing Aaron! It's simple words combined together with a beautiful strong message. "The Love of a Family is God's greatest blessing" :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Madhu :)
the power of prayer from Christians is more powerful than a atomic bomb
in Mathew 18 and 19 the lord says ask me for anything and I will give it to you
all we have to do is pray and believe he will do it and give him praise

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

You got that right! Thank you very much for the review
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
AWESOME, BRAVO! This is amazing, truly heart felt and touching! I love this piece!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed! Honor thee mother and thee father, you did just
that, PTL!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much James! That might be the only time I have had both my parents by my side. Than.. read more
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

This was so touching my brother, my pleasure:)

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