Unstable

Some thoughts going through this journey we call life

Unstable, like a newborn giraffe

Legs are crumbling, struggling to hold

Falling, like leaves from an old oak tree

Shattered like pieces from a dropped glass

 

Need supreme strength to re-mold myself

Strong like the Egyptian pyramids,

Permanent like the Mayan ruins

Strength that’s as durable as graphene

 

It’s time to rebuild myself

And start this life all over

Create a purpose in life

Find ways, inspire others

 

Reviews

[Irenic]

Unstable, like a newborn giraffe
Legs are crumbling, struggling to hold
Falling, like leaves from an old oak tree
Shattered like pieces from a dropped glass

reality

It’s time to rebuild myself
And start this life all over
Create a purpose in life
Find ways, inspire others

inspirational


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like it.

thanks for sharing

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much irenic :) Sometimes life feels that way but you gotta find strength any where you can :)

[Irenic]

Welcome...........:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"It’s time to rebuild myself
And start this life all over
Create a purpose in life
Find ways, inspire others"
Thank you for sharing the positive and good wisdom. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Coyote... appreciate your feedback and kind words my friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[micky]

Gosh Aaron this one hit close to home especially the fist 2 stanzas
Keep going dude:)

[AaronFreitas]

I am glad you could relate to it... it's always a more powerful impact when the reader can relate to the words :) thanks my friend

[Emily]

Short but inspiring, Aaron!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Emily :) Check out my new one I posted today my friend :)

[Emily]

Ok, will do!

[AaronFreitas]

Thanks my friend :)

[W R Stowe]

The scriptures say there is a time to build and a time tear down and all things in there due season We have more resolve than we realize acknowledging this is a good start carry on my friend

Bill

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much my friend!!!

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Great piece, love! I don't think you realize how truly talented you are!
You inspire me, daily!

I love the part about the baby Giraffe!
Great Job!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Ashley :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

You are very welcome!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

WOW! Aaron that was amazing... And that poemed has inspired someone already. That is me... That very deep to... Keep up the good work! And that is so true... Life is totally like that.. From what I've already been through. Life can be a pain in the rear! lol. Again amazing piece Aaron ;-) ♥

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Tessa! I am glad it inspired you :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

No thank you!!!!! Im not much of a writer but it inspires me to write alot more!!!! So thank you so much Aaron♥ for inspiring me to write more about life!!! :-)

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Such beautiful thoughts you share :) Truly lovely

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you again Lynn.... I appreciate you stopping by to read my work :)

[Death's Poet]

Beautiful poem! So well written and has a lovely flow to it. I also Identify giraffes as my spirit animal so the bit about the giraffe made me smile ear to ear, love it!

[AaronFreitas]

haha I admit the Giraffe picture was awesome by itself lol... I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review :)

[Melinda McQueen]

There's much strength in these words. We all have a purpose, we must live it.
A good write.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Melinda. I am slowly finding my purpose and doing the best I can with it :)