This is beautiful, I too feel alone. This was so real. I didn't feel alone anymore as I read it, I like how starting off went from what seemed like a sad mood to bringing hope in your situation. you did not just leave it as, (I'm alone, etc) it went to ( I know she is out there) .. some people lose hope, I have. But in reading this to be able to give someone hope through your words, is a very powerful gift.. love this Aaron
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Thank you :) I could probably re-post this each week and the feelings stay the same... still search.. read moreThank you :) I could probably re-post this each week and the feelings stay the same... still searching haha Appreciate your review :)
You're very welcome, And even in your response lays deep words (I could probably re-post this each .. read moreYou're very welcome, And even in your response lays deep words (I could probably re-post this each week and the feelings stay the same..) sorry I can't help it. I find beauty in almost everything :)
ah, beautiful and tender words. Full of hope, when you'll be ready it will come, at least that's what i tell myself :)
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Thank you very much Ana! Yeah I trust that when the time is right it will all fall in to place :) .. read moreThank you very much Ana! Yeah I trust that when the time is right it will all fall in to place :) Patience is a virtue
This is a wonderful piece Aaron. Keep searching, she's out there!
I've learned that, with relationships, the best one is the one that you have to wait for. Experiencing this loneliness, we're going through, will help us to later be even more grateful!
This piece was just beautiful!
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Thank you very much Ashely! When you find yourself alone with nothing else is when we can truly see.. read moreThank you very much Ashely! When you find yourself alone with nothing else is when we can truly see who we are... it's been a learning experience for sure and whoever ends up being the person will get the best version of me there has been :) Thanks for reviewing
Brother as you know, I'm in the same boat! Here is the thing, we are single
cause we're good guys, now the ladies say they want a guy like us, but not true
because here we are! They want a bad boy, someone that will
treat them terrible, cheat on them and all kinds of other horrific
things, so they can call there girl friends and bicker day in and day
out, and write feel sorry for me poems for years! Let's be honest brother
I'm not talking about all of them, but the majority truly have no idea
what they want:( but they sure think they do! Anyways great piece stay
patient and humble, and all in due time the good Lord will provide
he always does! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
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I hear ya bro! It's that devils temptation that gets the best of some people such as those wanting .. read moreI hear ya bro! It's that devils temptation that gets the best of some people such as those wanting the bad guys... it's meant for us to find someone on the right path. The Lord will provide in due time.... I patiently wait and one day we will both find the ones meant for us. Thank you for the review!
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I have to disagree with James. Someone sounds a bit bitter.. However, I know what I want, but there .. read moreI have to disagree with James. Someone sounds a bit bitter.. However, I know what I want, but there comes times when "the nice guy" is presented but something gets in the way i.e distance, bad timing, etc. I also know that there are girls like me, who have been cheated on & we're terrified. Even if you tell us over and over that you're a "nice guy" we're still leery..
Not all of us like to call our "girlfriends" & bicker. I have no girlfriends to call.. Lol. & as for writing "feel sorry for me" poems, what exactly do you call you're "I'm lonely" pieces.. Sorry but the bitter tone and condescendment of women, made me a little angry. don't assume you know everyone!
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Amen! I agree completely, b-blessed!
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Whoa!! Out of line JT, you can't lump all women in that category!
There are women with low .. read moreWhoa!! Out of line JT, you can't lump all women in that category!
There are women with low self esteem that fall into that bucket and it's sad but most women just want to be loved. Shame on you!
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haha I don't think James was trying to lump all women into one category but I understood what he mea.. read morehaha I don't think James was trying to lump all women into one category but I understood what he meant. There are times where you have a friend or someone you know whom who connect with and you know you could be so happy together yet she chooses to be unhappy and in an unhealthy relationship. Or she wants someone a little more on the dangerous side... I don't think James is bitter at all just an honest view on "some" women that may have come across in life. Finding the good ones is the hard part :) You know we love you Ashley and Miss AKA Lillith :)
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I know. :) Just giving him a hard time!
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haha thats what I figured :)
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Love you guys too!!
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You truly are a good man brother and I'm absolutely positive that the good Lord
has something.. read moreYou truly are a good man brother and I'm absolutely positive that the good Lord
has something great for us both when he says it's time, as far as the ladies taking my
review the way they did, my bad I by all means didn't mean to take
away from your amazing poetry! I really wish they would have read the
part where I said NOT ALL WOMEN... anyway really killer piece:)
I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..