Searching for love

Been feeling super lonely lately... wish I had that special someone to spend this time with.

I sit here all alone wishing I wasn’t

I want someone to love me

I wouldn’t say I’m hard to love

Just take the time to understand me

 

I’m miles away from being perfect

Perfection is just a goal never met

My heart has a lot of love to give

The right woman hasn’t arrived yet

 

Someday she will reveal herself

I will reach out for my queen

The beauty that her mind and soul possess

Is unlike any beauty that I have ever seen

 

To hold and kiss her softly

Is more than a dream come true

It is a love dreamt over and over again

A love sent from above, pure and true

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[silent poet]

This is beautiful, I too feel alone. This was so real. I didn't feel alone anymore as I read it, I like how starting off went from what seemed like a sad mood to bringing hope in your situation. you did not just leave it as, (I'm alone, etc) it went to ( I know she is out there) .. some people lose hope, I have. But in reading this to be able to give someone hope through your words, is a very powerful gift.. love this Aaron

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you :) I could probably re-post this each week and the feelings stay the same... still searching haha Appreciate your review :)

[silent poet]

You're very welcome, And even in your response lays deep words (I could probably re-post this each week and the feelings stay the same..) sorry I can't help it. I find beauty in almost everything :)

[AaronFreitas]

haha thanks :)

[silent poet]

:) Anytime

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely poem Aaron and like in life you can't hurry love like sitting on the grass quietly a butterfly will come and sit on you but if you try to catch it the butterfly will fly away.

[AaronFreitas]

Very true Andrew... I will patiently wait :) Thanks for the review!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is not too much to ask for...just for someone to be patient enough to get through my walls, get to really know me, and love me for who i am....no, not too much to ask at all.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you for the review! We think it's not too hard but here I am waiting haha... thanks

[Madhu]

Being single sometimes can be very fruitful, it gives a lot of time to explore more about ourselves and our passion. Don't feel lonely when you have writers cafe to read amazing stuff whenever you want. :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much for the review. I am learning more about myself now than I ever have. Understanding my thoughts better and understanding who I am :) Thanks for taking time to read my work :)

[Madhu]

My pleasure :)

[~]

I wish you a good time doing what makes you happy, until she arrives my friend. :)

[AaronFreitas]

Well thank you very much skittles :) I am trying to just enjoy everything one day at a time

[RAOrourke]

Loved your poem, very thoughtful and romantic piece! Nice job!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much! I appreciate you stopping by to comment :)

[nazia]

No one is perfect Aaron.. Just be who you are and one day you will find that one person who will be proud of you despite everything.... A very emotional and touching piece :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Nazia! I continue my waiting process :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Beautiful and a great read, you can feel the 'longing".

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much :) I keep waiting and waiting...

[W R Stowe]

Love is something that can't be found by searching for it, love tends to find us when we least expect it.Unfortunately us men folk miss out because we have difficulty telling the difference between love and lust be patient my young writer friend love will find you the Philippines are full of beautiful women

[AaronFreitas]

Hmmm might have to check the Phillipines out... thanks for the advice an the review!

[Coyote Poetry]

A perfect love. Can't be reached. Two people must bend and flex to find their perfect place.
"I’m miles away from being perfect
Perfection is just a goal never met
My heart has a lot of love to give
The right woman hasn’t arrived yet"
All of dream of the perfect person. I believe perfect love is someone who can make us smile, laugh and feel safe. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AaronFreitas]

You nailed it when you said perfect love is someone who can make us smile, laugh and feel safe and happy. Thank you for the review my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Emily]

Simply sweet! I feel the same way.

[AaronFreitas]

It takes patience to not settle but I want it now!!! haha thanks for the review Emily :)