Faith First

Acrostic Poem in honor of National Acrostic poem day

F rom the beginning of our existence 

A ll man kind has sinned

I t started with Eve taking that simple first bite

T hen sin became part of our normal existence

H ow can we as humans change our future paths?

F irst we can put our faith first

I f we truly believe in faith we can slowly improve our lives

R eality is that judgement day will arrive

S ome will find the Heaven’s and some will fall to hell

T ime to decide, will you put your faith first?

Author's Note

my first try at an acrostic poem

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Very nice Aaron but it started with Eve yielding to the temptation that resulted in the first bite from the apple

Bill

[AaronFreitas]

Yes indeed :)

[Alisa Trudel]

This is great! My only correction would be *Heavens

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much for the review... I will fix that as soon as I can. :)

[wordman]

well you did a great job with it,and a good message

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much!

[Ana B.]

Very good for a first try :) The message here is very strong. Lovely poem :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Ana!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Oh, that was very nice first try! I like the introduction to the story of how sin was born. And then how we can seek redemption from our ancestral sins as well as our own.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Nadia... I'll be honest I was bored and haven't written much, well haven't posted much and I saw the acrostic day so I decided to give it a shot. Thanks for your kind words friend :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

For your first try that's really awesome.
You are so talented Aaron!!

Great piece!

[AaronFreitas]

Thanks Nikki... means a lot!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of thoughts in the poem. Faith, love and kindness. We followed the teaching of Jesus. This world would be a better place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much for the review. I was trying to figure out a good term or good words to do an acrostic on and this is what came to me. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. Hopeful and good thoughts.

[Jamestown]

This is fantastic! I am going crazy over here:) I'm so impressed my brother!
You just blew me away! All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much... I got that email about acrostic poem... no lie had to look it up make sure I was doing the right thing. Figured I would pick something I am passionate about. Thanks for your kind words