For my Daughter

For my Daughter

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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For my daughter Zoe on her sixth birthday

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I think of you and how amazing you are

Six years ago today you were born

My beautiful little angel, my baby girl

You made me the luckiest father in the world

 

You always seem to amaze me

In everything you ever do

You always make me smile

I admit, I am so proud of you

 

You are so much like me

In so many ways

Your temper and competitiveness

Straight from my DNA

 

Today on your sixth birthday

I was so happy to be with you

I wanted to tell the world

Just how much I love you

 

For my daughter Zoe 

 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


Author's Note

AaronFreitas
I wrote this for my daughter on her birthday

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dan
Aaron, So many poems posted on WC are about fantasy, dreams and pain...this is so warm and fuzzy (a GOOD thing) it brought a tear to my eye. So genuine and raw, nothing pre-processed or overdone...just pure love from a dad to his precious daughter. I hope Zoe is as proud of her daddy as daddy is of her. Beautiful writing, my friend. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you Dan :) It's been a year since I wrote it but I'm still just as proud of her. She turned .. read more



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this was wonderful! I bet she'll treasure it forever! Amazing job, my friend! Nicely penned :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
This is a honest and tender write. Her Father taking the time to admire her young life is one of the greatest presents one could ever give. I hope Zoe had a memorable birthday. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Christopher! She definitely did :)
So sweet and precious. A poem she can treasure always. Made me cry. In a good way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Aww thank you Michelle :) I have to find a way to print on some nice paper and frame it for her
One from a nice father, love is like a flood here. I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Bonaventure!
Adorable and so full of love. Sweet, endearing words. Happy B day to Zoe :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana! She had an awesome day and today is her official b-day party :)
Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Awesome! Well, enjoy the party all of you :)
This is so beautiful man, I loved the honesty and purity in this piece...its simple and deeply moving
I hope she had a great birthday.
cheers and wishes!



Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much... she had a great day she says!
This is so sweet! Great poem Aaron.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
and a happy birthday to zoe

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much wordman!
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are wlcome,was my pleasure
Why did you want to go and make me cry for Aaron ;D
This is a pure delight my friend - truly it is.
Good for you - God Bless you all
anto :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO.... means a lot :)
ANTO

9 Years Ago

Cool my friend. :))
Aaron, this was beyond beautiful. It makes me smile to see a guy who actually appreciates Fatherhood. You are such a good dad. This was really a great piece. Wonderful job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nikki
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Welcome babe

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